Good work, Gene. Looks real smooth. If your goal is bonefish in the keys, don't forget to work on accuracy on quick casts. I've been pretty good with accuracy, but doing it quickly to a moving target has always been a problem for me - particularly getting the distance right when I'm shooting the line out. Get a hula hoop or two, throw them down on the ground 40-60 feet out, and try to drop a fly in there on the third false cast starting with almost no line out. Distance is always great, but with sight fishing, you'll catch way more fish being able to accurately hit a target 40-60 feet out than being able to bomb a 100 footer somewhere in the same zip code as the fish.
For advanced practice, go out with a couple people, tie some yarn on the end of your fly line, and have someone wander around 40-60 feet in front of you as if they were a fish. With your eyes closed, wait til someone - either a "guide" or the person wandering - yells the direction (like 10 o'clock, like a guide would), then open your eyes, pick them up, and see if you can drop the yarn in front of them as they continue moving.