The style has to be fine art oil painting, which this is not. You don't
have to find a landscape, but something in the fine art oil painting
style (or close enough if one squints) is required.
On 5/23/24 8:06 PM, Elizabeth Miller-Boldt wrote:
> How's this for the cover? it's one of the illustrations in the book. The
> other covers have landscapes, so if you'd rather me continue in that
> vein, that's fine.
>
>
https://mdl.artvee.com/sftb/909206il.jpg
>
> On Thursday, May 23, 2024 at 2:50:57 PM UTC-4
lukasby...@gmail.com wrote:
>
> Welcome back!
>
> 1. You can leave those.
> 2. Also leave these. It looks like the second one starts a new sentence.
> 3. That can be standardized. I'd probably make them both 'zactly.
> 4. Modernize to maybe.
> 5. I'm not sure I understand. "Bellows" in that case seems to make
> sense (see definition on MW
> <
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/bellows>).
> 6. Sure, you can add hyphens where appropriate.
> 7. Yes, modernize chipmonk, and add a closing quote (in a separate
> editorial commit), that seems like a printer error.
>
> On Thursday, May 23, 2024 at 4:13:10 AM UTC+2
mb.eliz...@gmail.com
> wrote:
>
> I'm back :))
>
> 1.
>
> Billina’s signature "cackle"
> <
https://archive.org/details/ozmaofoz0000lfra_q0h6/page/24/mode/2up?view=theater> and literal clucks <
https://archive.org/details/ozmaofoz0000lfra_q0h6/page/150/mode/1up?view=theater>– would all of these be considered onomatopoeias to italicize?
>
> 2.
>
> Should I be standardizing capitalization after dialogue tag
> with semicolon (IA 26
> <
https://archive.org/details/ozmaofoz0000lfra_q0h6/page/26/mode/2up?view=theater>vs 28 <
https://archive.org/details/ozmaofoz0000lfra_q0h6/page/28/mode/2up?view=theater>) or is that just wandering into too much editing?
>
> 3.
>
> Do I standardize or modernize zactly
> <
https://archive.org/details/ozmaofoz0000lfra_q0h6/page/40/mode/2up?view=theater>/ ’zactly <
https://archive.org/details/ozmaofoz0000lfra_q0h6/page/215/mode/1up?view=theater>?
>
> 4.
>
> Do I modernize “may be
> <
https://archive.org/details/ozmaofoz0000lfra_q0h6/page/52/mode/2up?view=theater>” (as in perhaps) – I modernized “may bes” in a Hardy Boys book but is this just a US v UK thing that I leave alone?
>
> 5.
>
> The printer either added an “a” or added a “s” in bellows vs
> bellow
> <
https://archive.org/details/ozmaofoz0000lfra_q0h6/page/59/mode/2up?view=theater>– is there a preferred way to go with this?
>
> 6.
>
> Some of Tiktok’s language isn’t standardized in some places.
> The general rule is to insert a hyphen at each syllable,
> should I fix all of these?
>
> 1.
>
> An-y-one vs an-y one
> <
https://archive.org/details/ozmaofoz0000lfra_q0h6/page/71/mode/1up?view=theater>– per modernizing any one to anyone, Tiktok’s goes from an-y one to an-y-one
>
> 2.
>
> Can not
> <
https://archive.org/details/ozmaofoz0000lfra_q0h6/page/79/mode/1up?view=theater>vs can-not – cannot is presented elsewhere in the work but Tiktok’s is written out as can not in two different places, it just seems as though the printer forgot the hyphen since, treated as one word, it would be “can-not”
>
> 3.
>
> Command -> co-mmand
> <
https://archive.org/details/ozmaofoz0000lfra_q0h6/page/150/mode/1up?view=theater>? – it looks as though the author forgot to add the hyphens to a multi-syllable word. Leave it as is or change it to fit Tiktok’s broader speech pattern?
>
> 7. “....from a chipmonk to fat babies. – Do I modernize
> chipmonk and/or close the quotation
> <
https://archive.org/details/ozmaofoz0000lfra_q0h6/page/120/mode/1up?view=theater>? I know in some books editors leave off the ending quote if the speaker continues speaking in the next paragraph, but so far the entire book has used a closing quote at the end of a paragraph and a different character speaks next
> 8. “....from a chipmonk to fat babies. – Do I modernize
> chipmonk and close the quotation
> <
https://archive.org/details/ozmaofoz0000lfra_q0h6/page/120/mode/1up?view=theater>? I know in some books they leave off the ending quote if the speaker continues speaking in the next paragraph, but so far the entire book has used a closing quote at the end of a paragraph and a different character speaks in the next paragrah
>
>
> On Monday, April 29, 2024 at 12:17:26 AM UTC-4
>
lukasby...@gmail.com wrote:
>
> You should standardize "dinner pail". Probably removing the
> hyphen would be preferable, but you can decide based on what
> fits with the rest of text.
>
> For everything else you can keep the hyphens if you think
> they're necessary, but modernize the spellings (as we often
> do with poetry). Don't worry about non-break hyphens.
> On Sunday, April 28, 2024 at 4:33:54 PM UTC+2
>
mb.eliz...@gmail.com wrote:
>
> Good to know; I'll keep that flag in mind for the future
> -- I ended up just going through and manually doing
> them. Since there weren't too many.
>
> I do use a GUI called Pulsar, but I'll take a look at
> Git Fork as well; thanks for the suggestion!
>
> As for the modernize spelling, there are some I didn't
> change; are these okay or would you rather me go with
> what the tool told me?
>
> *
>
> “un-lock” in Ch 4 due to Tiktok’s way of talking
>
> *
>
> “for-ward” in Ch 10 due to thinking it was for
> effect (non-hyphenated version of it appears just
> before and elsewhere). Add non-break hyphen?
>
> *
>
> “scollops” in Ch 16 due to potential dialect
>
> *
>
> “for-ward” in Ch 17 due to thinking it was for
> effect (non-hyphenated version of it appears just
> before and elsewhere). Add non-break hyphen?
>
> *
>
> “clew” (instead of "clue") in Ch 18 due to potential
> dialect
>
>
> A chapter title is "Dinner Pail" but it is written
> “dinner-pail” throughout the text. Should I modify to
> one or the other?
>
> On Sunday, April 28, 2024 at 2:07:00 AM UTC-4
>
lukasby...@gmail.com wrote:
>
> Not that I'm aware of.
>
> One thing that might help is the --no-hyphens flag.
> You can run modernize-spelling with the --no-hyphens
> flag first to modernize all the spelling, commit
> that and then run modernize-spelling again to do the
> hyphens. Also, if you're not already using a
> graphical interface for git, you should consider
> switching to one (I use Git Fork
> <
https://git-fork.com>, but there are others out
> there). It makes the process of viewing and
> staging/unstaging specific changes /much/ easier.
>
> On Sunday, April 28, 2024 at 3:52:30 AM UTC+2
>
mb.eliz...@gmail.com wrote:
>
> Is there anyway to do the accept/decline changes
> during se modernize? Almost all of Tiktok's
> dialogue is getting its hyphens dropped. :)) If
> the answer is "just write down the correct
> modernizations and do those" I'm prepared for it
>
> On Saturday, April 27, 2024 at 2:31:45 PM UTC-4
>
lukasby...@gmail.com wrote:
>
> I can manage.
>
> On Saturday, April 27, 2024 at 8:04:15 PM
> UTC+2 Alex Cabal wrote:
>
> No italics then, thanks!
>
> On 4/27/24 12:29 PM, Elizabeth
> Miller-Boldt wrote:
> > Yes, all of his speech is like that;
> I'll keep in the regular hyphens.
> >
> > ToC in Scans
> >
> <
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https://archive.org/details/ozmaofoz0000lfra_q0h6/page/n11/mode/2up>>
> > Italics in chapters
> >
> <
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