Oh, from looking at your website I don't see that you are more
commercial than say, I am, which is after all the measure we all use,
is it not? :-P
On a technical point, in neither Chrome nor Firefox can I find your
pricing when I was looking for it. I found a button which says
pricing, but there isn't any pricing there. It says to enter my email
above, but there is no box for that, on that page. I then have to be
clever enough to figure out that you mean earler in the series (as you
have set it up in a linear fashion) but in fact the contact box is one
page below, not above. I am your potential buyer and I am not that
clever.
1) Never promise anything you will not deliver, it makes you look
untrustworthy. If the button says pricing I do not expect to have to
give you my email address. I expect a price. If you haven't got one
(and I am about to take my own prices down as they confuse people it
turns out) then don't call that button "pricing".
2) The "above" thingie is confusing -- most people think you mean "at
the top of this page, above this text block" and most will not go
hunting for it.
3) You need pictures. Lotsa pictures. I don't want to hear about the
relaxing atmosphere and the stunning view, I want to see them.
Otherwise it sounds like a come on.
4) I like the way you have live chat set up to respond when you are
not there with a "leave a message". This seems to be what all the
cool kids are doing now, the live chat, but it's very annoying when it
responds "Hi, how can I help you? " and I answer and it turns out
there is nobody there.
5) If you are live and not yet open, which appears to be the case, I
would come out and say so somewhere before the very last page. At
this moment your website promises an existing community, a place full
of people right up until the last bit. If it is not at this very
moment an existing community, don't say it is, it makes you look
untrustworthy. Just say "we are creating a community, come be a part
of it" or "We are a group of blah blah and we are looking for
baldibla". Or something like that.
Just some thoughts, they are no doubt worth what you paid for them. :-
P And welcome to the group.
Jeannine