[zPE-dev] Rough Draft of the Paper

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Tony Zhang

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Apr 26, 2012, 3:55:23 PM4/26/12
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I've looked through and made several changes / suggestions. The modified version can be found in attachment.

Words in blue are what I've added / changed; words in red are what I thought need to be removed; and words in orange are my comment that should not appear in the merged version.

One thing I would like to make clear is that the original plan is changed as the project move forward. For example, nothing is right now, or will be in future, compiled into PC program.

I've also updated the download links, although we will need to update it again soon.

P.S. Please make the subject line meaningful. You can change it even if you're replying an old E-mail and you should do that unless you're actually replying that E-mail. Thanks.

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Tony (Chi Zhang)


On Thu, Apr 26, 2012 at 12:28 PM, Georgia Brown <jorja....@gmail.com> wrote:
Here is a rough, very rough draft of what could become a paper. Tony, I changed all the personal pronouns to be generic, but I'll check with Reva to be sure. I just think it sounds better. I added some stuff about the Z390 system (and how this is better:). I think we need at least one screen shot of the GUI, but haven't decided on what exactly. Can each of you, perhaps, add or send me a paragraph or so of what you did and I'll see if I can incorporate it? The first and second pages have a lot of overlap and I will edit that down. Tony, I'm thinking some examples of some of the parsing code might be interesting(ie a simple one and one that is more complex).
If you all don't send me anything, I'll make something up, so don't ignore this!
Georgia


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