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skyrover7
Oct 31, 2008, 1:53:25 AM10/31/08
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A little while back TheZorch issued a Halloween challenge. Well, I
haven't written anything for quite awhile, but I had an idea hit me,
so here is the prologue of an untitled Halloween story.
Setsuna Meioh sat in her favorite chair and looked out her panoramic
window at the Crystal Tokyo skyline. Its once graceful spires were now
broken and blackened, harsh reminders that there is no true victor in
war.
The war with the Nemesis was over and Crystal Tokyo would be rebuilt,
but she knew that it really didn’t matter. The human race was dieing
and Crystal Tokyo was the cancer.
A cancer that formed by a Queen whose fault was that she loved too
much and did not want to see anyone hurt. So in her folly she cleansed
the earth and then exiled those who could not be cleansed to Nemesis.
The cleansing removed all the drive from the people. Sure, they were
happy, but there were no new inventions, no new music composed and….no
more babies born.
“How will the world end? Not with a bang, but with a whimper,” she
whispered sadly.
“Maybe not, Setsuna Meioh,” a voice said from behind her.
Setsuna stood and turned slowly, seeing a tall, blue-haired woman
dressed in a fashion she had not seen since the Silver Millennium.
“I’m afraid you have me at a disadvantage,” she said. “Why would a
Jurian noble be here to see me?”
“You are mistaken, I am not a Jurian noble, but since you know of
Jurai you may have heard of me. My name is Tsunami.”
Setsuan’a eye twitched. She knew who her guest was. Taking a breath to
compose her self, she spoke, “That changes things but if makes the
question even more important. Why is the Goddess of Jurai visiting
me?”
“The simple answer is to help you. When the senshi first awakened I
was…indisposed and could not help. But now, I can and will.”
“How,” Setsuna’s reply was terse.
“I know two of the senshi were not awakened because you did not know
they had been sent forward. They were on a diplomatic mission to Jurai
and were killed defending the emperor during a failed coup. At the
same time I sensed Queen Serenity sending the spirits of the senshi
forward.
“Because of their honor and valor I sent their spirits forward as
well. Terra and Sol would have made a difference. With them you could
have prevented the great freeze and the human race would have
continued to develop under the leadership of Queen Serenity’s first
born, Selene.”
“But that’s the rub, isn’t it? Setsuna said. It could have made a
difference. You know as well as I that I am not allowed to change the
flow of time.”
“That would normally be true, but I have a special dispensation from
Kami-sama. Also, he is sending his daughter Urd, goddess of the past,
to help.”
As Tsunami was speaking a tall, slim, platinum haired woman stepped
through the mirror in Setsuna’s room.
“Tokimi just finished the spell work on their uniforms. Have you told
her about Ethan Raine?
haven't written anything for quite awhile, but I had an idea hit me,
so here is the prologue of an untitled Halloween story.
Setsuna Meioh sat in her favorite chair and looked out her panoramic
window at the Crystal Tokyo skyline. Its once graceful spires were now
broken and blackened, harsh reminders that there is no true victor in
war.
The war with the Nemesis was over and Crystal Tokyo would be rebuilt,
but she knew that it really didn’t matter. The human race was dieing
and Crystal Tokyo was the cancer.
A cancer that formed by a Queen whose fault was that she loved too
much and did not want to see anyone hurt. So in her folly she cleansed
the earth and then exiled those who could not be cleansed to Nemesis.
The cleansing removed all the drive from the people. Sure, they were
happy, but there were no new inventions, no new music composed and….no
more babies born.
“How will the world end? Not with a bang, but with a whimper,” she
whispered sadly.
“Maybe not, Setsuna Meioh,” a voice said from behind her.
Setsuna stood and turned slowly, seeing a tall, blue-haired woman
dressed in a fashion she had not seen since the Silver Millennium.
“I’m afraid you have me at a disadvantage,” she said. “Why would a
Jurian noble be here to see me?”
“You are mistaken, I am not a Jurian noble, but since you know of
Jurai you may have heard of me. My name is Tsunami.”
Setsuan’a eye twitched. She knew who her guest was. Taking a breath to
compose her self, she spoke, “That changes things but if makes the
question even more important. Why is the Goddess of Jurai visiting
me?”
“The simple answer is to help you. When the senshi first awakened I
was…indisposed and could not help. But now, I can and will.”
“How,” Setsuna’s reply was terse.
“I know two of the senshi were not awakened because you did not know
they had been sent forward. They were on a diplomatic mission to Jurai
and were killed defending the emperor during a failed coup. At the
same time I sensed Queen Serenity sending the spirits of the senshi
forward.
“Because of their honor and valor I sent their spirits forward as
well. Terra and Sol would have made a difference. With them you could
have prevented the great freeze and the human race would have
continued to develop under the leadership of Queen Serenity’s first
born, Selene.”
“But that’s the rub, isn’t it? Setsuna said. It could have made a
difference. You know as well as I that I am not allowed to change the
flow of time.”
“That would normally be true, but I have a special dispensation from
Kami-sama. Also, he is sending his daughter Urd, goddess of the past,
to help.”
As Tsunami was speaking a tall, slim, platinum haired woman stepped
through the mirror in Setsuna’s room.
“Tokimi just finished the spell work on their uniforms. Have you told
her about Ethan Raine?
ThreadWeaver
Oct 31, 2008, 11:30:24 AM10/31/08
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Well, it looks good, but there's a couple 'quirks' there.
First, Tsunami and her sisters are the Creator Kami. They made the
universe- they said so- and mixing them with AMG would make Kami-sama an
underling to them. It feels wrong to have it the other way around now
that the info in the 3rd set of anime came out. If I recall, the AMG
anime never really outwardly said that Kami-sama created the universe.
Dispensation in this story would come from Tsumani or her sisters
themselves, not Kami-Sama.
Second, Belldanady's transport medium is Mirrors, Urd's is Televisions.
Use the time gate to port Urd in.
"Now THAT'S a TV you have here!"
"..." *Twitch* *twitch*
Oh, wait... she's not at the time gates... Damn. Well, they have to
have some sort of TV there, unless Usagi "Cleansed" the world of that too.
First, Tsunami and her sisters are the Creator Kami. They made the
universe- they said so- and mixing them with AMG would make Kami-sama an
underling to them. It feels wrong to have it the other way around now
that the info in the 3rd set of anime came out. If I recall, the AMG
anime never really outwardly said that Kami-sama created the universe.
Dispensation in this story would come from Tsumani or her sisters
themselves, not Kami-Sama.
Second, Belldanady's transport medium is Mirrors, Urd's is Televisions.
Use the time gate to port Urd in.
"Now THAT'S a TV you have here!"
"..." *Twitch* *twitch*
Oh, wait... she's not at the time gates... Damn. Well, they have to
have some sort of TV there, unless Usagi "Cleansed" the world of that too.
Michael "TheZorch" Haney
Oct 31, 2008, 11:59:08 AM10/31/08
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ThreadWeaver wrote:
> Well, it looks good, but there's a couple 'quirks' there.
>
> First, Tsunami and her sisters are the Creator Kami. They made the
> universe- they said so- and mixing them with AMG would make Kami-sama an
> underling to them. It feels wrong to have it the other way around now
> that the info in the 3rd set of anime came out. If I recall, the AMG
> anime never really outwardly said that Kami-sama created the universe.
> Dispensation in this story would come from Tsumani or her sisters
> themselves, not Kami-Sama.
>
> Second, Belldanady's transport medium is Mirrors, Urd's is Televisions.
> Use the time gate to port Urd in.
>
> "Now THAT'S a TV you have here!"
>
> "..." *Twitch* *twitch*
>
> Oh, wait... she's not at the time gates... Damn. Well, they have to
> have some sort of TV there, unless Usagi "Cleansed" the world of that too.
Seems like a good idea so far and I'd follow ThreadWeaver's > Well, it looks good, but there's a couple 'quirks' there.
>
> First, Tsunami and her sisters are the Creator Kami. They made the
> universe- they said so- and mixing them with AMG would make Kami-sama an
> underling to them. It feels wrong to have it the other way around now
> that the info in the 3rd set of anime came out. If I recall, the AMG
> anime never really outwardly said that Kami-sama created the universe.
> Dispensation in this story would come from Tsumani or her sisters
> themselves, not Kami-Sama.
>
> Second, Belldanady's transport medium is Mirrors, Urd's is Televisions.
> Use the time gate to port Urd in.
>
> "Now THAT'S a TV you have here!"
>
> "..." *Twitch* *twitch*
>
> Oh, wait... she's not at the time gates... Damn. Well, they have to
> have some sort of TV there, unless Usagi "Cleansed" the world of that too.
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be online for a while during the online upgrade process.
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