第一次写 ISUEE （ISUEE 6）各位大虾帮帮忙啊

[吴宇哲]

6. The most effective to understand contemporary culture is to analyze
the trends of its youth.

提纲：
1.承认analyze the trends of its youth是必要的，因为youth 代表fashion culture，是
contemporary culture的组成部分。（这段是老师上课是的举例，老师写的）
2.论证adults and senior也是必要的，因为adults and senior代表traditional culture，是
contemporary culture的essential part。
3.论证foreigner 也是必要的，因为foreigners代表international culture,是contemporary
culture的新出现的part。



Is analyzing the trends of its youth the most effective way to
understand contemporary culture, as the speaker contends? I do concede
that it is impossible to understand contemporary culture in all
aspects without taking the trends of its youth into consideration.
However, it is also requisite through adults and senior to roundly
understand contemporary culture. Moreover, citizens who come from
other countries are also indispensible parts to analyze, especially
for those culture described as variety and international.

It is truly that necessarily through analyze the trends of youth, only
which can reflect the fashionable part of contemporary culture, can
one really understand the current way of life. After all, the youth
who symbolize the leading voice different from traditional culture as
an indispensible part of contemporary culture have shown a great
curiosity and creativity. It is derives from a continuous exploration
and innovation. Taking internet culture as an example, internet is
welcomed by millions of young people in developed countries and fast
developing areas during the last 20 years. The popularity of internet
culture clearly illustrates the spirit of creativity and innovation
inevitably connected with an era of rapid pace and intense
competition, which exerts far-reaching influence on future life style
and language.

However, it is also necessary through adults and senior, who symbolize
the tradition and even more essential parts of contemporary culture
that one can fully understand of contemporary culture. Having exposed
to a certain social circumstance for many years, the behavior, way of
thinking and outlook of life of adults and senior inevitably
influenced by tradition of culture, which is also the indispensible
part of the contemporary culture. This part, described as wisdom and
perspective, is almost always the decisive indicator of a greet
country. For instance, more and more adults and senior are interested
in tradition art forms like Peking opera in China. This tendency
clearly demonstrates the wisdom and perspective inevitably connected
with an increasing complexity of contemporary life, which exerts a
more fundamental influence on contemporary culture.

What's more, without analyze the character of its foreign citizen the
conception of contemporary culture will be conservative and out-of-
data. Those foreigners, who conventional influenced by their own
culture, have been branded the foreign value system, way of thinking,
and outlook of life, even if their everyday behaviors are quite
similar to the native. This foreign culture, at the same time, erodes
the native culture as well as compromise by the culture conflict, and
finally emerges in some certain aspects of native contemporary
culture. For example, more and more Chinese elements, like "kongfu",
"Chinese silk", and " spirit of dragon" are presented in the United
States and the theory developed in ancient China are become popular
during the last ten years. This example strongly illustrates that the
Chinese culture affect the contemporary culture of the Unite states,
and the importance of its influence will be more and more crucial in
the future.

In sum, without youth, one may overlook the fresh and fashion aspect
of contemporary culture; without adults and senior, one may neglect
the tradition and essential aspect of contemporary culture; without
foreigner, one may fail to notice the new-come and international
aspect of contemporary culture. So, to truly and roundly understand
contemporary culture, youth, senior and foreigner are all needed.


这篇文章写了2个多小时，好像越写越不顺，问题好多：
1. 例子太匮乏啦，我只能想到中国的例子，对于国外的一点也不了解。
2. 语言好像很不顺，读起来感觉特别扭。
3. 打字太慢啦，而且经常打错修改，结果最后拼写也错了很多。


各位大侠，有遇到过这些问题吗？ 有什么好的解决办法吗？ 小弟在这先谢过啦！

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我也才写了一篇，也很烂...多练、多看、多总结是王道