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sukhdevi_k...@moe.edu.sg
May 24, 2009, 7:49:26 PM5/24/09
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Click on ALL the presentations on this blog.
Give feedback on any TWO of the presentations.
What to write?
1. what you liked about their work
2. what new information you learnt from them
3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
Do this by the end of this week.
Give feedback on any TWO of the presentations.
What to write?
1. what you liked about their work
2. what new information you learnt from them
3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
Do this by the end of this week.
zhi qian
May 25, 2009, 7:12:42 AM5/25/09
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Seawalls
-What you liked about their work?
I liked the clear and relevant pictures in their powerpoint
presentation.
-What new information you learnt from them?
I learnt that seawalls have to be carefully maintained as the backwash
can destroy the base of the seawall,causing it to collapse.
-Suggest how they could have presented their work better?
They should add more powerpoint slides ,organise their information in
a neat and systematically way .
-What you liked about their work?
I liked the clear and relevant pictures in their powerpoint
presentation.
-What new information you learnt from them?
I learnt that seawalls have to be carefully maintained as the backwash
can destroy the base of the seawall,causing it to collapse.
-Suggest how they could have presented their work better?
They should add more powerpoint slides ,organise their information in
a neat and systematically way .
zhi qian
May 25, 2009, 8:37:22 AM5/25/09
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Cliffs and notches
-What you liked about their work?
I like the clear and neat presentation of their work and the relevant
description they had given.
-What new information you learnt from them?
I had gained a greater understanding of what cliffs and notches are
and I had learnt how to identify them.
-Suggest how they could have presented their work better?
They should elaborate more about the formation of cliffs and notches
and if possible,try to add some animations.
-What you liked about their work?
description they had given.
-What new information you learnt from them?
I had gained a greater understanding of what cliffs and notches are
and I had learnt how to identify them.
-Suggest how they could have presented their work better?
They should elaborate more about the formation of cliffs and notches
and if possible,try to add some animations.
me
May 26, 2009, 1:39:52 AM5/26/09
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Seawall
time
> 1. what you liked about their work
the information given are in point form and it is very precise
> 2. what new information you learnt from them
seawall requires a lot of maintainance due to the constant wave action
> 3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
more diagrams to better potray how exactly seawalls are damaged over
time
Gaozheng
May 30, 2009, 1:46:20 AM5/30/09
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Seawalls
i like the clear explanation of seawalls
I learn that seawalls protect the coast by absorbing wave energy
They should add some animation.
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Front, back wash & gabion
i like their labeling
i learn that the erosion/deposition of the coast is affected by the
front and back wash
They should add some animation. [i believed there's some error in the
ppt]
i like the clear explanation of seawalls
I learn that seawalls protect the coast by absorbing wave energy
They should add some animation.
_______________________________________________________________
Front, back wash & gabion
i like their labeling
i learn that the erosion/deposition of the coast is affected by the
front and back wash
They should add some animation. [i believed there's some error in the
ppt]
sukhdevi_k...@moe.edu.sg
May 30, 2009, 9:07:34 AM5/30/09
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what error?
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sukhdevi_k...@moe.edu.sg
May 30, 2009, 9:08:55 AM5/30/09
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could you please put this blog address on your class blog and remind
the rest to log in and respond?
I've changed it to open membership.
tks
the rest to log in and respond?
I've changed it to open membership.
tks
GenNaXD
May 30, 2009, 11:15:11 PM5/30/09
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Seawalls
1. what you liked about their work
The descriptions are clear.
2. what new information you learnt from them
the seawalls are usually man-made
3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
the colour of the words can be changed to let others read the words
easier
Gabions
1. what you liked about their work
the presentations are clear
2. what new information you learnt from them
i've learn that gabions are used to protect river banks against
erosion
3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
give more descriptions about gabions
1. what you liked about their work
2. what new information you learnt from them
3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
easier
Gabions
1. what you liked about their work
2. what new information you learnt from them
erosion
3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
Eunice Teo
Jun 25, 2009, 12:40:35 PM6/25/09
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1.Sewalls.
> 1. what you liked about their work
The photographs (background of the slides) were beautiful.
> 2. what new information you learnt from them
the main objective of seawalls is protect the coast against strong
waves, especially during storms.The disadvantage is that it is
expensive as it needed to be maintained and it must be changed
overtime due to erosion.
> 3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
They should have changed the font colours.
Longshore Drift.
> 1. what you liked about their work.
The presentation is very clear and it is easily understood.
> 2. what new information you learnt from them
The swashes helped to push the material up the beach and backwash down
the beach.
> 3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
Though it is clear, the presentation is rather plain, they should add
more colours as it look a bit dull.
> 1. what you liked about their work
> 2. what new information you learnt from them
waves, especially during storms.The disadvantage is that it is
expensive as it needed to be maintained and it must be changed
overtime due to erosion.
> 3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
Longshore Drift.
> 1. what you liked about their work.
The presentation is very clear and it is easily understood.
> 2. what new information you learnt from them
the beach.
> 3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
more colours as it look a bit dull.
amarjeet
Jun 29, 2009, 4:56:49 AM6/29/09
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Seawall-
What you liked about their work?
I liked the pictures and information provided.
What new information you learnt from them?
I learnt that seawalls is a form of coastal protection, although its
maintenance price is expensive.
Suggest how they could have presented their work better.
The font size and colour.
What you liked about their work?
What new information you learnt from them?
maintenance price is expensive.
Suggest how they could have presented their work better.
The font size and colour.
wesley lim.
Jun 29, 2009, 8:55:34 AM6/29/09
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SEAWALLS
1. what you liked about their work
Short and sweet
2. what new information you learnt from them
-Seawall is needed to protect the coast, thereby lessen coastal
erosion
3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
- Make it more informative. Additional one or two more slides.
1. what you liked about their work
2. what new information you learnt from them
erosion
3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
wesley lim.
Jun 29, 2009, 9:00:06 AM6/29/09
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LONGSHORE DRIFT
1. what you liked about their work
Easy to understand
2. what new information you learnt from them
i can now understand in depth the formation of the longshore drift.
3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
If possible, do not link the videos.
1. what you liked about their work
2. what new information you learnt from them
3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
larsp...@gmail.com
Jun 29, 2009, 9:09:38 AM6/29/09
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Longshore Drift
What you liked about their work.
-Nice slides and relevant information.
What new information you learnt from them
-The movement of materials depends on the action of waves.
Suggest how they could have presented their work better.
-Make the slides more attractive.
Gabions
What you liked about their work
-Good powerpoint.
What new information you learnt from them
-Gabions can be used to protect river banks.
Suggest how they could have presented their work better
-Add more information.
What you liked about their work.
-Nice slides and relevant information.
What new information you learnt from them
-The movement of materials depends on the action of waves.
Suggest how they could have presented their work better.
-Make the slides more attractive.
Gabions
What you liked about their work
-Good powerpoint.
What new information you learnt from them
-Gabions can be used to protect river banks.
Suggest how they could have presented their work better
-Add more information.
Myth
Jun 29, 2009, 9:22:30 AM6/29/09
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1. what you liked about their work
Their presentation.
2. what new information you learnt from them
3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
Jun de
Jun 29, 2009, 9:35:56 AM6/29/09
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> Click on ALL the presentations on this blog.
> Longshore Drift.
1. what you liked about their work
Clear and detailed
2. what new information you learnt from them
> 3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
Jun de
Jun 29, 2009, 9:40:39 AM6/29/09
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> > Seawalls
the energy from the waves is redirected
downwards, to the base of the seawall,
resulting in a strong backwash
>
1. what you liked about their work
Easy to undrstand
1. what you liked about their work
>
2. what new information you learnt from them
As waves break against the seawall,
2. what new information you learnt from them
the energy from the waves is redirected
downwards, to the base of the seawall,
resulting in a strong backwash
>
3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
Explain in more details and organise their points in points form3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
the dreamy gal
Jun 29, 2009, 9:46:35 AM6/29/09
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> 1. what you liked about their work
organised and the second presentation i like is the cliff and notches
as it is very colourful and will make us want to read and you can
read it without difficulty.
> 2. what new information you learnt from them
we can find notches as easily as we can find cliffs.
> 3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
and make it colourful and still can be read. The second presentation
can change the colour and not used the same colour.
sofia
Jun 29, 2009, 9:47:34 AM6/29/09
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i) Seawall
1. what you liked about their work:
The eleboration on seawall is clear and well-detailed.
> 2. what new information you learnt from them
I've learnt that seawalls protect the coast against strong waves
especially during storms
> 3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
If possible, label the pictures to identify where the seawalls are. It
would be clearer.
1. what you liked about their work:
The eleboration on seawall is clear and well-detailed.
> 2. what new information you learnt from them
especially during storms
> 3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
would be clearer.
sofia
Jun 29, 2009, 9:55:32 AM6/29/09
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ii) Long shore drift
1. what you liked about their work:
It is well-eleborated as well as clear explaination diagrams.
> 2. what new information you learnt from them:
Long shore drift is a process which sediments move a long a beach.
> 3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
Although the presentation is short and clear, add some animations to
make it more engaging.
1. what you liked about their work:
It is well-eleborated as well as clear explaination diagrams.
> 2. what new information you learnt from them:
Long shore drift is a process which sediments move a long a beach.
> 3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
make it more engaging.
Cheng Mun
Jun 30, 2009, 4:17:05 AM6/30/09
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Seawall
2. what new information you learnt from them
I learn that the seawall is built in front of a cliff or along
the coast to protect a coast from erosion and it is man-made.
3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
They should put a video.
1. what you liked about their work
Their work is neat and presentable.Pictures were clear and nice.
2. what new information you learnt from them
the coast to protect a coast from erosion and it is man-made.
3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
Singyi
Jun 30, 2009, 4:25:22 AM6/30/09
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Long shore Drift
I like their work because the information is short and simple and the
diagram explain the thing well.
I have learn that long shore drift is about the sediment moving along
the shore same with the wave direction.
They can maybe elaborate more.
Seawall
I like their work because there is enough information about the
seawall
I have learn that seawall absorb energy to reduce the wave energy
They can maybe label more on the picture or give diagram
I like their work because the information is short and simple and the
diagram explain the thing well.
I have learn that long shore drift is about the sediment moving along
the shore same with the wave direction.
They can maybe elaborate more.
Seawall
I like their work because there is enough information about the
seawall
I have learn that seawall absorb energy to reduce the wave energy
They can maybe label more on the picture or give diagram
Cheng Mun
Jun 30, 2009, 4:53:29 AM6/30/09
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gabions
1. what you liked about their work?
Good presentation and powerpoint.
2. what new information you learnt from them
Gabions were used to protect the coast from erosion
3.suggest how they could have presented their work better.
More information
1. what you liked about their work?
Good presentation and powerpoint.
2. what new information you learnt from them
3.suggest how they could have presented their work better.
More information
MIYOKO {:
Jun 30, 2009, 10:09:05 AM6/30/09
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LongShore Drift
> 1. what you liked about their work
-their presentation .
> 2. what new information you learnt from them
-the formation of longshore drift . i am much more clearer after the
slides .
> 3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
-put in more information .
> 1. what you liked about their work
> 2. what new information you learnt from them
slides .
> 3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
WeiJian
Jun 30, 2009, 12:16:41 PM6/30/09
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Seawalls
1. what you liked about their work
The presentation is clear.
2. what new information you learnt from them
Gabions
1. what you liked about their work
The presentaion is clear.
2. what new information you learnt from them
I learn that the erosion/deposition of the coast is affected by
the
front and back wash.
3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
To have more description for gabions.
1. what you liked about their work
2. what new information you learnt from them
I learnt that seawalls have to be carefully maintained as the
backwash
can destroy the base of the seawall,causing it to collapse.
backwash
can destroy the base of the seawall,causing it to collapse.
3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
They should have more power point slide.
Gabions
1. what you liked about their work
2. what new information you learnt from them
the
front and back wash.
3. suggest how they could have presented their work better.
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