Hi Tim,
I am sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you. For some reason your email came to this address. The main email is
la...@yourplotthickens.com.
First off, where are you? Are you in the South Bay or LA area?
Yes, we have a critique group coming up on April 27th. You could get feedback on your writing there.
Also, I have a class that deals with story structure that begins on June 6th. This will teach you everything you need to know about structuring your story. It's called the 63 Day Screenplay and Novel Miracle. You leave with a rough draft completed. You have access to the instructor during the week, for any questions you might have.
I hope this answered your question.
Feel free to call me on my cell:
805-217-8641 if you have any other questions.
Best,
Lara