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Feb 21, 2010, 8:46:55 PM2/21/10
to happy belle xing, yichao...@googlegroups.com, singletondev singletondev, caoda...@gmail.com
hi team,

Please review the English modified by volunteers.

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2010/2/21 happy belle xing <isabel...@gmail.com>:
> 我综合了你刚才的email还有王爸爸的感言 加了一段。 tks
>
> Yichao Wang passed away peacefully at 8:30am, Feb 20, 2010 in Palo Alto,
> California. He is survived by his loving wife Yuying, father Lian Wang, and
> mother Jin Chen. Born on May 31, 1984 ( Chinese Lunar date: May 1st, Jiazi
> Year) in the northeast Chinese city of Harbin, Yichao graduated from Fuhua
> Elementary School, Sixty-Nine High School, Affiliated High School to Harbin
> Engineering University, received his Bachelor of Engineering from Harbin
> Engineering University in 2007 as a straight-A student. He was supported by
> a full scholarship at Nanyang Technology University, Singapore in 2008 where
>
> he pursued his doctoral studies. Yichao was a young, hardworking, and
> promising researcher. He presented a paper at an international conference
> in Dubai in November 2009. On December 8, 2009, Yichao came to Stanford
> University as a visiting Ph.D student.
>
>
>
> In addition to his outstanding academic achievements,
>
> Yichao was also very active with campus activities, student government, and
> volunteering in his community--his classmates nicknamed him "Great Leader
> Superman".
>
> Yichao enjoyed singing, calligraphy, swimming, and exploring nature. He was
> an outgoing and optimistic person who would always bring laughter to those
> around him.
>
>
>
>
>
> On Feb 3, 2010 at 9:30pm, he was struck by a car while bicycling home after
> a late night working at his lab at the Department
> of Civil and Environmental Engineering. After battling brain damage and
> a coma for two weeks at Stanford Hospital, Yichao passed away peacefully at
> 4:
> 30pm PST, Feb 19, 2010 ( 8:30am Feburary 20, 2010, Beijing Time). He was
> diligent, he was kind, and most of all, he was a smart, dignified man with a
> wonderful caring heart. A celebration of Yichao's life will be held on
> February xxx, 2010, at xxxx PM at xxxxxxx Home in xxxx. In lieu of flowers,
> a donation maybe made to XXXXXXXXXXXX.
>
> 2010/2/21 happy belle xing <isabel...@gmail.com>
>>
>> 你要把这些加进去 我觉得太复杂了 因为之前的已经提及了他聪明能干??我觉得刚才的format比较简洁 更正式。 如果一要加
>> 最多加他(王叔叔写的感言提到的)从小就有的兴趣和爱好 比如多才多艺 喜欢唱歌 文艺活动热爱大自然 喜欢帮助别人热衷社区活动 instead。
>> 如果你觉得我的建议可以采纳 我可以马上再刚才版上添加
>>
>> On Sun, Feb 21, 2010 at 3:28 PM, singletondev singletondev
>> <single...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>
>>> I am trying to use some quotes from some email
>>>
>>> Yichao was a very cheerful, always smiling, energetic person. He was very
>>> intelligent and hard working, working on many projects related to reverse
>>> osmosis membranes at once. He was thirsty of knowledge. He was at Stanford
>>> because his advisor graduated from our department and sent him here for 3
>>> months, so he could learn a lot of techniques from us.
>>>
>>> Yichao was very extraverted, and was beginning to know a lot of people in
>>> the department. People liked how smiling and outgoing he was. I really liked
>>> eating lunch with him because we would compare and taste each other's food.
>>>
>>> Yichao lived downtown Palo Alto and it had been about two weeks that he
>>> was commuting by bike. Last time I talked to him about biking, he was very
>>> happy to loose so much weight because he was biking back and forth between
>>> home and work twice a day.
>>>
>>> On Sun, Feb 21, 2010 at 3:14 PM, happy belle xing
>>> <isabel...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>
>>>> Yichao Wang passed away peacefully at 8:30am, Feb 20, 2010 in Palo Alto,
>>>> California. He is survived by his loving wife Yuying, father Lian Wang,
>>>> and
>>>> mother Jin Chen. Born on May 31, 1984 ( Chinese Lunar date: May 1st,
>>>> Jiazi
>>>> Year) in the northeast Chinese city of Harbin, Yichao graduated from
>>>> Fuhua
>>>> Elementary School, Sixty-Nine High School, Affiliated High School to
>>>> Harbin
>>>> Engineering University, received his Bachelor of Engineering from Harbin
>>>> Engineering University in 2007 as a straight-A student. He was supported
>>>> by
>>>> a full scholarship at Nanyang Technology University, Singapore in 2008
>>>> where he pursued his doctoral studies. He was very intelligent and hard
>>>> working, working on many projects related to reverse osmosis membranes at
>>>> once. He was thirsty of knowledge. He presented a paper at an international
>>>> conference
>>>> in Dubai in November 2009. On December 8, 2009, Yichao came to Stanford
>>>> University as a visiting Ph.D student. On Feb 3, 2010 at 9:30pm, he was
>>>> struck by a car while bicycling home after a late night working at his lab
>>>> at the Department
>>>> of Civil and Environmental Engineering. After battling brain damage and
>>>> a coma for two weeks at Stanford Hospital, Yichao passed away peacefully
>>>> at 4:
>>>> 30pm PST, Feb 19, 2010 ( 8:30am Feburary 20, 2010, Beijing Time). He
>>>> was
>>>> cheerful he was kind, and most of all, he was a man with a wonderful
>>>> caring heart. His smiling will be remembered. A celebration of Yichao's
>>>> life will be held on
>>>> February xxx, 2010, at xxxx PM at xxxxxxx Home in xxxx. In lieu of
>>>> flowers,
>>>> a donation maybe made to XXXXXXXXXXXX.
>>
>>
>>
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