The Poison Gamble
Ralf Penderak
I’m through now with „The Poison Gamble” and write while memory is
still fresh. I read it in a hurry, just because of the suspense. It is
a great fantasy or science – fiction story, maybe more like social
fiction – if there is anything like this. A story worth reading all in
its own. Only the dream notes coming with each chapter make everything
much richer, add not just one, but more dimensions to the plot, and
the reader should mind your words, Dolores, elsewhere on your website
on not to apply too straightforward single layer interpretations to
your writing.
How deep this story goes can maybe be seen in my dream almost
immediately tuning into it. I feel the characters so deep and lively,
and I feel a high emotional, psychological, philosophical charge in
your novel. That is why I’m sure it is not merely about your personal
growing up, though you see all the Fireheart Friendclan as parts of
your body. The least I can say is I found your story touching me, and
I found it hard to take sometimes, and then I can say I found nothing
alien.
Brave Dreamdeer, you say you had no choice but being honest and report
dreams and thoughts the way you did. I’m not sure if I had the
strength to so boldly go out in the public.
Intend to write more, later…
Ralf
Dolores J. Nurss
check my email today. I'm so glad I did!
On 12/11/2011 3:31 PM, Ralf Penderak wrote:
> Hi, Dreamdeer and all!
>
> I�m through now with �The Poison Gamble� and write while memory is
> still fresh. I read it in a hurry, just because of the suspense. It is
> a great fantasy or science � fiction story, maybe more like social
> fiction � if there is anything like this. A story worth reading all in
> its own. Only the dream notes coming with each chapter make everything
> much richer, add not just one, but more dimensions to the plot, and
> the reader should mind your words, Dolores, elsewhere on your website
> on not to apply too straightforward single layer interpretations to
> your writing.
>
> How deep this story goes can maybe be seen in my dream almost
> immediately tuning into it. I feel the characters so deep and lively,
> and I feel a high emotional, psychological, philosophical charge in
> your novel. That is why I�m sure it is not merely about your personal
> growing up, though you see all the Fireheart Friendclan as parts of
> your body. The least I can say is I found your story touching me, and
> I found it hard to take sometimes, and then I can say I found nothing
> alien.
>
> Brave Dreamdeer, you say you had no choice but being honest and report
> dreams and thoughts the way you did. I�m not sure if I had the
> strength to so boldly go out in the public.
>
> Intend to write more, later�
>
> Ralf
>
--
Life is beautiful and dangerous--beware! Enjoy!
For those following my writing, I have most recently
posted "In the Company of Friends", Chapter 31 of
"The Outlaw God", Vol II: "The Tempest of Alroy",
plus dream-notes.
Dolores J. Nurss
like a real writer, now!
Ralf Penderak
You ARE a real writer :)
I'm through with "Harvest of Young Minds", very interesting and
inspiring. Hope to write more, later.
On Dec 15, 4:11 am, "Dolores J. Nurss" <dreamd...@grailmedia.com>
wrote:
Dolores J. Nurss
--
Life is beautiful and dangerous--beware! Enjoy!
For those following my writing, I have most recently
posted "Rebuilding", Chapter 1 of
"The Outlaw God", Vol III: "Skirmishes of Souls",
plus dream-notes.