Two thought's on Celia's Haiku from Jill

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jill stockinger

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Aug 29, 2022, 6:41:59 PM8/29/22
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HAIKU  by Celia

 

 

There are no more rules

Eat dessert before dinner

I’m a true rebel

 

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Dear Celia--

There’s irony: you are making a NEW Rule:

Eat dessert before dinner.

 

You mean REBEL not revel, in last line! (A typo, I’m sure) Jill

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