Helen's 3 haiku Jill

[jill stockinger]

3 Haiku       Helen Cooper

 

Tee Time                                (Helen- great image, amusing thought!)

 

Neon pink golf ball

plinthed on tufted meadow grass   

ready to tee off.

 

 

Eyebrows  (2 suggestions. Amusing poem! I like it. Jill)

 

Grandpa turned eighty—    (I’d either add the hyphen or a semicolon. Just a suggestion)

his gray tufted eyebrows look

constantly surprised.   (and a period!)

 

 

Kelly Green     (I Love this one! Jill)

 

The grass is so lush

surely Leprechauns have danced

on this Kelly green.