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I was quoting The Velvet Underground song in my poem Jill

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jill stockinger

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Feb 14, 2023, 12:25:31 PM2/14/23
to Rennaissance writing Group, pattis...@comcast.net
Patti- I really like your suggestion, to change the quoted line,  and instead use one of my own. I will use the one you suggested. It's Good! Thank you.  
Accordingly, I will use And I know I'm Jesus's son, so I won't need quotes. 

When I had the quotes around the line, "And I feel like Jesus's son,"
I was quoting from the song Heroin by the Velvet Underground. Actually- I did not even check- I  had thought I was using an Exact quote- but I had forgotten the word "just."

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Heroin
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I don't know just where I'm goingBut I'm gonna try for the kingdom, if I can'Cause it makes me feel like I'm a manWhen I put a spike into my vein
And I'll tell ya, things aren't quite the sameWhen I'm rushing on my runAnd I feel just like Jesus' sonAnd I guess that I just don't knowAnd I guess that I just don't know
I have made the big decisionI'm gonna try to nullify my life'Cause when the blood begins to flowWhen it shoots up the dropper's neckWhen I'm closing in on death
And you can't help me, not you guysOr all you sweet girls with all your sweet talkYou can all go take a walkAnd I guess I just don't knowAnd I guess that I just don't know
I wish that I was born a thousand years agoI wish that I'd sail the darkened seasOn a great big clipper shipGoing from this land here to thatOn a sailor's suit and cap
Away from the big cityWhere a man cannot be freeOf all of the evils of this townAnd of himself, and those aroundOh, and I guess that I just don't knowOh, and I guess that I just don't know
Heroin, be the death of meHeroin, it's my wife and it's my lifeBecause a mainline to my veinLeads to a center in my headAnd then I'm better off than dead
Because when the smack begins to flowI really don't care anymoreAbout all the Jim-Jim's in this townAnd all the politicians makin' crazy soundsAnd everybody puttin' everybody else downAnd all the dead bodies piled up in mounds
'Cause when the smack begins to flowThen I really don't care anymoreAh, when the heroin is in my bloodAnd that blood is in my head
Then thank God that I'm good as deadThen thank your God that I'm not awareAnd thank God that I just don't careAnd I guess I just don't knowAnd I guess I just don't know
Source: Musixmatch
Songwriters: Lou Reed
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