A small suggestion for Celia's haiku for October 5, 2023. Jill

[jill stockinger]

Dear Celia, 

I like the sentiment inscribed in the haiku. I see this as 2 definite full sentences, related to each other. That is why I recommend punctuation. Also, "meeting friends" is one thing; "having fun" is a second.

So you need to use "are" as the verb. The last sentence would change to this:

Meeting friends and having fun are what keep me  sane. Jill

 

 

                           Haiku        by Celia M.

 

Keeping busy helps;

meeting friends and having fun

are what keep me sane.