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Oct 10, 2024, 3:18:30 PM10/10/24

to Writing...@googlegroups.com, jills...@gmail.com, Marian Kile, jerr...@gmail.com

Hi All,

Here is the next installment.

Lisa: protagonist who was killed by her husband and is dead.

Josh: Abusive husband

Angelina: Josh's ex-wife. He killed her years ago. She is dead also.

Tom: Insurance investigator whose brother is in the same care facility as Lisa's dying father

Bruce: Josh's accomplice and friend to Chloe

Chloe: Josh's latest victim/relationship. She's 17.

Rita: New character. Works at DMV

Carl: New character. Works at DMV.

COLD REDEMPTION writing group by pages.docx

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Oct 10, 2024, 3:46:57 PM10/10/24

to writing...@googlegroups.com, jills...@gmail.com, jerr...@gmail.com, patti santucci

Patti,

Sitting on the end of my chair waiting for more. A few suggestions to consider.

Marian Kile

COLD REDEMPTION Kile.docx

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