Just wrote this. A "poor" haiku Jill

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Nov 14, 2023, 9:55:53 PM11/14/23

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This is not for our Thursday discussion. Just sharing. Jill

Jill Stockinger

Haiku

The apple presents

a tapestry of taste my tongue

unravels, with joy.

This is not a good example of a haiku, sadly—all three lines are one sentence,

unlike "real" haiku.

Jill

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