Weekly Dose of "Non-AI Writing"

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curtis nelson

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Feb 7, 2023, 1:11:45 PM2/7/23
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Every flower in

the garden has felt your hand

touch me . . . make me bloom

 

 

 

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patti santucci

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Feb 7, 2023, 9:31:32 PM2/7/23
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Curt,

Love your haiku. Just beautiful.

Crossed the Line made me smile at the line indicating the narrator didn't tell her there was a line. The only thing I had on that was I think you meant ditto in the end.

Here are my thoughts on Sun in the Morning. May we all get up tomorrow, pour ourselves a cup of coffee (or tea) and find a moment to simply enjoy that sun.

Patti

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