Thoughts on Jerry's "Going into the Hospital"

[Elizabeth D.]

Dear Jerry,

Attached are some suggestions for you...a good ending in that we want to know more about what your child's mind was thinking and feeling and what happens next.

Liz

[Elizabeth D.]

Hi Jerry,

I hadn't read your last week's piece "Out of the Tunnel," I was very moved by your words, of what you have been through and what increased appreciation that has brought you to today. One of your better writings!

Liz