Jill's most recent version of "A Birthday and a Bakery"

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Nedra Crowe Evers

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Mar 4, 2024, 12:00:54 AM3/4/24

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Hi Jill,

I like the rewrite; it explains things better.

Is there a possibility of a title change? "New Beginnings" for example? Or "A Birthday of New Beginnings"? Or "Birthdays, Bakeries and New Beginnings." Or your choice.

Nedra

Memoir Jill A Birthday and a Bakery (1)--nce.docx

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