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Jan 23, 2024, 10:35:40 PM1/23/24

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Hi Jerry

I liked your essay very much. Very relatable.

I suggested changing from present tense to past tense in the first paragraph. The other paragraphs are fine. Please read my note at the end.

Nedra

The Latest Crisis--JR--nce.doc

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Jan 31, 2024, 2:02:26 AM1/31/24

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Hi Jerry:

Looks like you actually have two essays in one. Please read notes. Baseball is Life is a topic with lots of potential.

Nedra

Baseball Is Life (1)--JR--nce.doc

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