Poem for Thursday December 19 2024 No Thanks Jill

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jill stockinger

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Dec 14, 2024, 9:45:01 AM12/14/24
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Poem for discussion on Thursday, Dec. 19, 2024. NO THANKS. Jill


                  Jill Stockinger

             NO THANKS

             If I could no longer

  hear voices and see them

  in rainbow colors, too,

  my answer is no.

  If it means giving up

  the flavors of words

  on my tongue by taking

  medicine, I must say no.

  If I would not hear

  the specific musical note

  of each number

  as I add and subtract,

  then I want nothing to do

  with your offer of pills.

  They'd only lead me into

  a diminished world.

 

  I would gladly welcome you

  into my world that overflows

  with an abundance

  of mixed colors, smells, sounds

  and tastes. If only you could

  know the word ridiculous

  like I do: it tastes sweet and sour

  and comes out dressed in bright

  pink and orange hues like a clown.

  It always makes me laugh!

 

  I see no way around this:

  we stand on opposite sides

  of a door that is locked

  between us forever.

  You say I would become

 "normal" if only I'd take

  one small pill each day.

  That's like tearing wings off

  a flying creature and telling it,

 "Now you will walk on the ground

  and be just like the rest of us,"

  while you staunch the blood

  where the wings had once

  been attached, wings that had

  provided ecstasy and escape.

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Nedra Crowe Evers

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Dec 16, 2024, 1:18:42 AM12/16/24
to jill stockinger, Rennaissance writing Group, Nelson, Curt, Helen Cooper, pattis...@comcast.net, RSW Jerry Roth, Celia Mccauley, Robert L. Smith, Kaolin Fire, Max Stockinger, Kim Knighton, Kimberlee Wilson, rosemary...@gmail.com, Jim Gormley, Greg, jesse.earl...@gmail.com
Jill, this poem is fantastic. Incredible. One of your very best. Don't change anything.
Nedra

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