Third (last) poem for Thursday October 2 2025 DESIRE Jill

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Sep 25, 2025, 11:37:18 PM9/25/25
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Here's a bit of humor!

I've been working on this, on and off, for about 2 weeks. I decided to just go ahead and finish it.
I can always make more changes in the future.

So I am presenting this for discussion for Thursday, October 2. All suggestions Quite Welcome!  Jill



Jill Stockinger

 

Desire

 

It saddled and rode me

like a jockey rides a horse.

It whipped me into frenzy,

slashing with barbed whip,

drawing blood from my flanks

as I strived to overtake you.

 

On I raced, but you remained

firmly out of reach. Exhausted, 

                     I finally gave up the chase.

You’re’re not such a prize. 

I have decided I will wait

for one with a more placid gait.

 

 

Poem Jill Desire (It saddled and rode me).docx
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