Catch Me a Catch

[Jerry Roth]

In this story, I'm trying to move around more; from between first, second and third person as well as past and present. 

[Celia Mccauley]

Dear Jerry.

I love your story. Nothing like "love at first sight," and knowing that she was the one from looking at her on TV! No wonder she saw in you the same thing. I leave the suggestions and punctuations to the experts.

 

On Monday, June 3, 2024 at 06:05:24 PM PDT, Jerry Roth <jerr...@gmail.com> wrote:

In this story, I'm trying to move around more; from between first, second and third person as well as past and present. 

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