A haiku

Elizabeth D.

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Jan 14, 2024, 3:00:08 PM1/14/24

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A New Year brings forth

crazy, hare-brained ideas

dreaming us forward

jill stockinger

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Jan 14, 2024, 4:18:25 PM1/14/24

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Dear LIZ-

VERY GOOD haiku!

I love "dreaming us forward."

Jill

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Nedra Crowe-Evers

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Jan 15, 2024, 1:33:57 PM1/15/24

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Dear Liz,

Very good. "Dreaming us forward" is such a wonderful phrase. How about "The New Year . . . " instead of "A New Year . . . "? Your choice, of course.

Nedra

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