Revised childhood story

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Sobha Kollipara

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Nov 6, 2023, 5:23:27 PM11/6/23

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Dear All,

Please see attached. Thanks Marian for your help in correcting the mistakes and improving it. Still not sure of few of the sentences and the title. Appreciate your edits.

See you all on Thursday.

Sobha

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Escapades at the ocean’s edge Kile copy.docx

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