One last try REVISION of DO YOU HEAR THEM? for Thursday May 9 2024 Jill

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I am sure you're getting tired of this one! I incorporated suggestions from Marian and Nedra and I ADDED ONE NEW LAST STANZA! Jill

Jill Stockinger

Do You Hear Them? 

 

I go to the woods to escape the faces

of those dying a little more each day.

They're striving to live, but they're losing daily

in the smoke and grind of the cold, gray city.

Here, in the woods, I call on my muse;

in this verdant space, I write poetry.


These woods are filled with fairies,

dwarves and elves, strange creatures

quick to anger and slow to forgive.

They are known to give gifts

to the lost and unwary, gifts that may

prove bitter or achingly sweet.


These woods are filled with branches

outstretched with the great truth of trees,

homes to dryads who try to protect them

with their wiles and charms and with nymphs

peering shyly through fluttering sighs

and whispers of green and gold leaves.

 

Their graceful sisters, the naiads, swim

and laze in blue streams brimming

with tadpoles; they tumble and play

with the sleek darting fish. Spirits

like these live in every flower, inside

every swelled mushroom, in every stone.


These magical beings have veins that glow

with cold green or blue ichor or rich

yellow sap, so unlike hot human blood.

Wise to be wary, they hide from us.

Still and waiting, they hold their breath

as we disturb their peace.


My syllables of poetry will never be                      

as powerful as the invisible wind                         

that dances with these magical spirits,                  

that sweeps with laughter through the trees,          

that lifts me lightly out of myself                            

and cradles me in a green revery.

                                                                                                    

And my simple words will never

ward off the hands of men who fell

the trees, unaware that the doom of one

is tied to the other, that the continual

cascade of the deaths of forests

is tied to their own doom.

 

                   

https://dictionary.cambridge.org › dictionary › cascade

Cascade: to fall quickly and in large amounts: Coins cascade from/out of the fruit machine. 


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