Celia Some suggestions for your haiku Jill

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jill stockinger

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May 13, 2024, 1:36:23 PM5/13/24
to Celia Mccauley, Rennaissance writing Group, Nelson, Curt, Helen Cooper, pattis...@comcast.net, RSW Jerry Roth
Celia--Here are some suggestions to consider for your 3 haiku. Jill

HAIKU POEMS by Celia

 

Choose a mutt as pet

Never high maintenance breeds

You’ll be so grateful!                        (So verb tenses all fit)

 

Naughty, naughty pet

You thought I would not notice

yellow stain on rug

 

Chastising might work

Puppy eyes plead forgiveness

What am I to do?

 

She’s cute and cuddles

Mostly she’s the silent type

It’s a love affair

 

 

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