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[curtis nelson]

[Helen Cooper]

Perfectly hilarious!  Good to gnaw on! 

Helen

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[Marian Kile]

Curt,

I really enjoyed all three of these. I have no suggestions for the Cousins's but one minor suggestion for  Farmhand"

My body oozes humidity that turns

soil particles and dust to streams of mud

which take as paths of least resistance

down, across and over my bare upper body.

Marian Kile

916-217-1053 Cell

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