Jill's poem for Oct 19, 2023

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Oct 14, 2023, 1:18:02 AM10/14/23

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Dear Jill,

Very powerful imagery. Some suggestions though, a few unnecessary lines. (But not too many!). See attached.

Nedra

Poem Jill A Day of Holes (1)--nce.docx

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