My second poem for discussion Thursday January 2 2024 Hurting Jill

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Dec 31, 2024, 5:21:38 PM12/31/24
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Dear Compadres,

My first poem was a sonnet, Some Have Wild Blood.
 I attached it to this email as well.

This is my second poem for discussion on Thursday, January 2, 2024. Coming from a dark place. Wrote it today. 
Jill

Jill Stockinger

 

Hurting

 

Broken bodies, broken hope.

Counting lost lives.

We become stronger

in the broken places?

I think not. Just more lies

we tell ourselves, pretending

things will get better.

They do not.

 

I hold a litany of lies, printed

and parroted through the years

to help each generation carry on.

I try to read a solemn prayer

in front of grieving families.

The burden of loss they carry

is breaking them.

We have shed enough tears

to fill an ocean and we keep

praising a distant God,

but the slaughter never ends.

I will praise Him no longer.

Why should I? It makes

no difference to me or Him.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Poem Jill Huting (Broken bodies, broken hope).docx
Poem Jill Sonnet Some Have Wild Blood (In black of night, who pulls the moon).docx
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