Thoughts on Nedra's "Little Miss Sunbeam"

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Feb 12, 2024, 4:43:59 PM2/12/24

to Nedra Crowe-Evers, Writing...@googlegroups.com

Dear Nedra,

See my notes at the bottom... and some other ideas for your consideration.

Nicely done!

Liz

LITTLE MISS SUNBEAM.docx

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Feb 14, 2024, 6:44:14 PM2/14/24

to Elizabeth D., Writing...@googlegroups.com

Thank you Liz.

I just made the corrections you pointed out; I don't know how I could have missed so many. Your marks in blue were a big help.