Thoughts on Jill's Lover's Lament

[Elizabeth D.]

Dear Jill,

I really loved your Lover's Lament-just one idea attached for your consideration.

I don't have any decent suggestions for the other two, so I will leave it to others for any ideas on those.

I wish you would read "Digesting a Poem" -- I thought it to be unique and powerful. Will you reconsider?

See you Thursday,

Liz