One of Jill's poems

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Apr 23, 2024, 12:51:59 AM4/23/24

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Jill,

I love the last poem you wrote as a pantoum! It certainly responded to my questions about it.

I suggested more periods and less semicolons. But it's your choice.

All the words and phrases are perfect.

Nedra

P.S. More on the others soon.

Pantoum Jill Do You Want to Write a Pantoum_--nce.docx

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