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to Jill Stockinger, writing...@googlegroups.com
WOW!
I'm not familiar with Frank O'Hara's poetry and must admit that the first two examples you quote took several readings before I grudgingly admitted that he is good. His Sun/Fire poem was "easier" to follow.
That said, I love your poem! and have no suggestions. Every line zings. It's GREAT!