Weird story?

[Brandwyn]

Hi all,
I was wondering if anyone read my "story idea" post from July. It
was pretty much from left field, but I'm interested in knowing if it
seems even vaguely interesting to anyone other than myself. If it's
totally bizarre and obsure, I'd rather hear about it now before I
embarrass myself to a whole class.
Brandwyn

[Brooks]

Hi Brandwyn, I'm sorry I didn't reply earlier with what I thought. I
liked the plot, even though the characters confused me a bit. I figure
this is due to jumping in the middle though. I was however confused as
to the style of the story. At the begginning the letter form was
perfect, but I felt that it turned into a more conventional method of
telling a story, which was okay also, but I just couldn't see someone
actually writing that to a friend.

Keep up the good work, and I'm sure you won't embarrass yourself in
front of the class.

Brooks