Creative ISU Rough Draft (Poetry Collection)

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Naweed Zamani

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Oct 14, 2012, 3:53:58 PM10/14/12

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Suggest, critique, do as you will.

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Connor "the kid" Duggan

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Oct 14, 2012, 5:24:57 PM10/14/12

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Overall, I really enjoyed the collection of poems. There are a couple haiku's that have an extra sylablle, but you can fix that easily. I feel that you do a good job of attaching romanticism in many of your poems, but at the same time show that you are not enamored with the past; it's a nice contrast.