Team
If not anything, I urge you to at the least read the conclusion part of this doc. I just re-wrote the conclusion part alone. Rest of the doc is same as ver-1.  What I have tried to do in conclusion is to summarize the key recommendations that were mentioned in everyone’s input.
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Brian: Have you started on building slides yet?
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From: Raj Galagali
Sent: Tuesday, June 11, 2013 12:51 AM
To: wemba-1...@googlegroups.com
Subject: strategy - first cut
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Team attached is the first cut of our case paper that consists of inputs from everyone except Lakshmi and Horatio. It took me quite a  bit of time to take one doc at a time, trim it as I felt right and ensure there is flow in the master doc after integration.
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Lakshmi: Do you think you can see where and how you can fit key points from yours and Horatio’s piece in this? As you will notice, we don’t need to fit everything from every doc. The goal is to pick the nuggets and key message and fit it in to the story. I will be on the plane tomorrow from early morning until 3PM. Hence wanted to get this out in whatever shape I have right now. I think once we get the flow right, we can go back to fix rest of the issues like ref, etc.Â
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All others, please do read it if you can and provide inputs to ensure it meets what Elena mentioned during our feedback session.
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I have attached all the docs mainly as a ref in case you want to pick some more additional stuff from other docs. The priority is to get yours and HJ’s input wherever appropriate. Needless to say, you will notice some overlap in the content / messaging that is in yours and HJ’s doc. Â
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Feel free to modify this doc’s flow as well as you deem fit.
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/Raj
I think it's a very good start and flows fairly well. We still have some work to do -- e.g., Elena recommended defining terms better. I will try to highlight some of these points when I review the conclusion.
Another impression from my review was that it would be great if we could incorporate more data to support our positions. I would encourage others to think in these terms when you review it tonight.
One example, is there market data available on licensing of software for Juniper today? How much of SDN growth will be from a licensing perspective? In general, I think we should talk about licensing more as a new channel.
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From: wemba-1...@googlegroups.com [wemba-1...@googlegroups.com] on behalf of Brian Williams [brian.w...@fuqua.duke.edu]
Sent: Wednesday, June 12, 2013 4:52 PM
To: Raj Galagali
Cc: wemba-1...@googlegroups.com
Subject: Re: strategy - second cut
Overall I thought the paper looked good. Here are my recommended changes. Let me know if you have any questions about any of my comments.
Thanks.
H
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From: wemba-1...@googlegroups.com [wemba-1...@googlegroups.com] on behalf of Brian Williams [brian.w...@fuqua.duke.edu]
Sent: Wednesday, June 12, 2013 9:57 PM
I will try to put my piece of the LL report to bed soon, so that I can also give this priority attention tomorrow.
Perhaps we can divvy up the list.
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From: wemba-1...@googlegroups.com [wemba-1...@googlegroups.com] on behalf of Lakshmi Nizampatnam [lakshmi.n...@fuqua.duke.edu]
Sent: Wednesday, June 12, 2013 11:04 PM
To: Raj Galagali
Cc: Lakshmi Nizampatnam; wemba-1...@googlegroups.com
Our fearless leader on the Juniper project got stuck driving from Chlt to Durham this evening... per his recommendation, I have compiled the comments submitted by Kevin and Rashida into the attached document. There were still some questions that remain on the highlighted items but these will not take long to resolve.
See everyone tomorrow!
Thanks.
H
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From: wemba-1...@googlegroups.com [wemba-1...@googlegroups.com] on behalf of Raj Galagali [raj.ga...@fuqua.duke.edu]
Sent: Thursday, June 13, 2013 12:00 AM
To: Kevin Roy; Lakshmi Nizampatnam
Could you put another set of eyes on it?
I've tried to model it after the two sample reports Elena provided.
Rashida, Lakshmi and I are now working on the suggestions Lakshmi provided last night.
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From: Horatio Jones IV
Sent: Thursday, June 13, 2013 10:25 PM
To: Raj Galagali; Kevin Roy; Lakshmi Nizampatnam
Cc: wemba-1...@googlegroups.com