cider ride poster

[james devine]

PLease review

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Jim:

Great color - very attractive.  Some additional info that you might consider adding:

In the information regarding RSVP add a phrase about additional information, such as "For RSVP and additional information:  <meetup url>"

Also, no mention of lunch -- you know how hungry people are after a ride, especially in the cold weather. 

(Hey, you asked my opinion....)

Susan

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From: "james devine" <dev...@usa.net>
To: "Lisa McCormick" <lmccorm...@yahoo.com>, watchun...@googlegroups.com, watchung...@meetup.com
Sent: Monday, September 17, 2012 7:48:29 PM
Subject: {WatchungR&DClub72} cider ride poster

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