Help with some Prac SAC feedback

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Sep 8, 2024, 8:42:29 PM9/8/24

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Hi everyone,

I was wondering if anyone may be able to please help me with providing some additional feedback on a Prac SAC?

I'm at the stage where I have read the student's work so many times that I am struggling to give meaningful feedback.

I have attached it here. It was written during one of their spare periods.

Thanks,

Laura :)

VAPS Student Essay.pdf

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Sep 8, 2024, 8:43:38 PM9/8/24

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To clarify, they have handwritten the question at the top of the page. The actual essay begins under the greylead plan

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