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Amatoritsero Ede

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Peripatetic Poetics: Amatortisero Ede puts the idea of Place to the Test

by Brian Joseph Davis

Globetrotter & Hitler's Children

Black Goat/Akashic Books, 106 pages, $17.50

It is Toronto’s burden to inspire only complicated love in its citizens. Sure, some days we may long for that simplified, all-consuming loathing that Los Angelenos feel for their town or to have the capacity for brazen boasting particular to New Yorkers. I’ll take Toronto’s comfortable ambiguity any day and nominate as poet laureate Amatoritsero Ede. As a Nigerian-born, now Canada-based poet, Ede is well positioned to chronicle the realities of our city, as he does in Globetrotter, the first half of his diptych portrait of two countries. 

It is a paean but it is a suitably complicated and dead-on one. Ede’s style is amazingly compositional, using short percussive phrases to sculpt an exegesis of Hogtown — as it sees itself and how those outside see it. “toronto is / Amsterdam / adrift at sea,” Ede writes on his opening page. “toronto is / Prague / without her anchoring of / narrow streets narrow sky / and / virgin-tight apartment blocks.” 

For a city that, uniquely, swings between Protestant practicality during workdays and weekend-long orgies, Ede’s particular style is consonant with his subject. Old-fashioned techniques, like his judicious use of the exclamation mark, blend in with his evocative word clusters, such as “shelled like lobster / caught / in a frying pan fray / fried flag red.” Also, has Toronto’s summer ever been described as cannily as in this passage: “summer’s riot is loud / as it boils / you moonwalk / wade hung-armed / and bat-blind / through hot glue”? 

If Ede’s second section isn’t as satisfying, it is mostly by comparison to the strength of the book’s first 59 pages. Built around the author’s experience of contemporary Germany — something less liberal than the ideal vision of itself the country presents to the rest of the world — Ede damns the country’s abysmal treatment of its immigrant community. There’s anger, passion and Ede’s great writing, but the poet wanders into subjects ranging from the meaning of war to love with sometimes too-thick imagery. 

Individually, the pages of Globetrotter work, but wholeness proves elusive. That said, there’s no more perfect line of poetry this year than, “Evil is a professor,” and, where another poet might get bogged down in qualifications, Ede is not afraid to describe succinctly any empire’s primary villains: “men / with balls like cannon / thugs in bow tie....”


culled from Toronto's Eyeweekly Newspaper at http://www.eyeweekly.com/arts/books/article/65522

Amatoritsero Ede

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Aug 25, 2009, 5:34:06 AM8/25/09
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Folks,

I found another review online somewhere at 



globetrotter & hitler’s children, Amatoritsero Ede. (Black Goat, Akashic) $15.95

With the two most recent selection from Chris Abani’s Black Goat imprint, the editor continues to explore the experimental. Rick Reid’s debut collection is an experiment amaedein which the page itself is a “frame that superimposes itself temporally, aurally, and visually.” The text of each page appears in a sparse  free verse between two centered black dots, which give the effect that the collection is a single page with changing text, “producing a process of both afterimage and surfacing.” The text of the collection is less interesting than its conceptual foundations, but in the current age of evolving print culture the book raises interesting questions about the physicality of ink on paper, of the material construction of printed poetry.

Amitoritsero’s collection is made of two long poems, each composed of 26 lettered sections. The first, “globetrotter,” is a wanderer’s reflection on the city of Toronto, and the second, “hitler’s children,” is about the poet’s experience of contemporary Germany, framed within his vision of its “enabling, overarching ‘neo-liberal’ political atmosphere.” Both poems contain glimpses of genius, but the first is ultimately better than the second. Amitoritsero’s strength lies in his succint marriage of image and abstraction. His spatial descriptions are superb. From section c:

photographer
you have no perspective
wide as the autobahn

and from section d:

##what does the endless
###########north american sky
##########reveal

###like those sex workers
in amsterdam’s love quarters
########she says simply

####################i am wide open

The politics of the second poem are organic rather than forced, and at times—as in the leading segment, “The Skinhead’s Lord’s Prayer”—the poems are simultaneously humorous and tragic. An impressive debut by the Nigerian-born former Hindu monk, a truly successful contemporary practitioner of the long poem.





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