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By Biko Agozino
The debate in Texas between Hilary Clinton and Barack
Obama revealed what Clinton has been doing wrong,
revealing that she is not ready to perform even with
all her claim to being more experienced. The simple
rule that you should address your opponent in a debate
was ignored by Senator Clinton while Senator Obama
focused almost all his attention on either his
opponent or on the interviewers.
The difference is a performance strategic blunder for
Clinton who spoke as if addressing the camera, making
the viewer to see her as possibly overbearing, making
Obama to appear more agreeable and more focused. This
is a basic rule of the motion picture camera, you are
told to ignore it and speak directly to people
especially if you are going to be on screen for a long
time. Obama was ready for the task, Clinton was not.
For example, the interviewers, the experienced media
specialists that they were, never gazed into the
camera whereas Clinton could hardly get away from that
gaze the way amateurs do in front of the camera. Obama
came across as the seasoned professional ready to be
President from day one, but to even suggest that any
of the candidates would not be ready for the job from
day one is just another sign of a silly season for any
of them, in fact anyone would be ready from day one,
there was never anyone who was not ready from day one
as US President, and so the difference lies in who has
the better strategy and better policies for the people
with the yes we can American pragmatism of Obama to
implement the envisioned change.
The reluctance of Clinton to look at Obama as
attentively as he looked at her when addressing her or
answering the question that she apparently asked the
camera, reveals a suspected feeling of inferiority and
if you do not feel inferior to a guy who beat you in
eleven straight contests, then you must be living in a
fairytale world. However, she does not do this only
with her opponents, she does it with her supporters at
rallies by gazing into the cameras more than necessary
for a professional performer, perhaps because Kennedy
may have gazed into the camera to tell Americans not
to ask what their country could do for them, she may
have been advised, but then that was in the olden days
of television.
Today, such a staring gaze does not only make her look
more amateurish, it makes her also seem phoney or
scripted and choreographed for in the real world you
do not look into the camera while speaking to someone
sitting or standing next to you. That is actually why
actors are instructed from day one to ignore cameras,
to appear more real, to get real as it were. She did
not seem to know why the chairs were swivel chairs,
she sat rigidly staring straight ahead in a spooky way
while Obama swiveled round and took notes attentively
as she addressed him without looking at him.
The failure of Clinton to look people in the eyes when
talking to them reflects also a cavalier approach to
questions that would not be trustworthy in a leader
who is ready from day one. When she was asked in New
Hampshire who was her hair stylist for her hair looked
good all the time, she was said to have teared up
instead of giving credit to the hardworking stylist
whereas most women would respond with a smile and say
thanks or return the compliment and say that you do
not look bad either.
I am almost certain that if you asked Obama who his
barber was, he would tell you straight up so that you
know where to get you hair cut when next you are in
this city or that, or he could say that his wife was
his best barber for it is a simple low cut that he
wears, anyone could cut his hair the way most men and
women get by in America without the privilege of
personal barbers or stylists.
That inability to focus on questions showed up again
in the Texas debate when asked what the candidates
would consider to be the moment that most tested them.
Obama said that they were many but reminded the
audience that he was part of the American Dream which
said that even if you were raised by a single mother
(and your grandparents as he always adds), you could
rise to aspire to the white house, from a log cab in
to the white house. That same question to Clinton
produced what could be best interpreted as her
concession speech, a valedictory speech.
Refusing to answer the question, she seemed to have
been asked more questions especially by Mr Ramos than
Obama who got many more follow up questions instead
and perhaps prepared his thoughts better, she said
that everyone knew that she had gone through trials
and then she went on to talk, not about her own trials
but about the trials of others. She ended by saying
how proud she was to be sitting beside Obama, then she
xeroxed the words of John Edwards almost verbatim but
without acknowledgement, the same ‘silly season’
challenge she had posed to Obama earlier as political
plagiarism or photocopy type of change, and to which
Obama rebutted directly by saying that the allegedly
plagiarized words were given to him by a member of his
team who asked him to use it, but she did not
apologize for the misleading false charge of
dishonesty.
She was booed then by a largely university audience
which knew perfectly well that saying ‘We hold these
truths to be self-evident’ and asking if those were
just words but without citing the source is not really
plagiarism or academic dishonesty. At the end, she
tried to score points by echoing John Edwards when she
said that no matter the outcome of the election, she
and people like her would be all right (of course they
would be, they are millionaires), but how about the
people, she asked.
She could still help to serve the people by working in
a capacity other than Commander in Chief as she has
done in all her touted past experiences. Perhaps it is
time for her to throw in the towel and be a good
sport, accept that Obama is the better candidate for
her party. He is attentive to the fact that the
citizens must be united across party lines to make
their country greater for the benefit of all but she
seemed willing to allow the so called Superdelegates
to ‘sort things out’ in the end even though she knows
perfectly well that that would wound her party in the
coming election. She could improve the chances of her
party by conceding now openly and falling behind Obama
to give him all her support like many of his very
realistic supporters, including all the major
newspapers in Texas.
If she would not concede and is waiting for help from
party bosses, then those registered to vote in the
party primaries should continue to hand Obama
resounding victories that no Superdelegate would
ignore with a clear conscience. He came across as the
one who is more ready to be President from day one.
Biko Agozino is Professor of Sociology at the
University of the West Indies, St. Augustine, Trinidad
and Tobago: bago...@yahoo.com
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My message does not demonize Clinton at all. I gave
her free media consultancy advice that would cost her
millions of dollars to buy. It is too late for her to
apply my advice now and so I called on her to support
the better candidate. Would I call on the devil to
support anyone? No.
My comments were on her leadership skills in front of
the camera and in response to questions. I found her
lacking in the technical details that I identified. It
was a constructive criticism for the benefit of those
who might find themselves in front of a camera
tomorrow without knowing how to take charge of the
situation and respond to questions adequately. If you
are not ready for such a simple task, my view remains
that you are not yet ready for the challenges of
leadership in the present multimedia world.
Her idea of taking boxing gloves to office as
President to fight her enemies was correctly
identified by Obama as old divisive politics. Why?
Because the job of the President comes with a job
description which says that you will be president for
the USA as Obama never tires to remind us, you will
not be a President for only your friends and family.
Obama is right in seeking to unite all the people
across party lines because you will find liberals in
the Republican Party and you will find conservatives
in the Democratic Party. Obama is the best candidate
out there but you are entitled to support any other
candidate of your choice without accusing those who
see flaws in your candidate as demonizers. As Obama
says repeatedly, Mrs Clinton is his friend and they
share a lot of policy positions but negative
campaigning and divisive politics would not succeed in
implementing those good policies.
Obama's strategy of mobilising the young and the
old,white and black, men and women to oppose
lobbyists, bring back the troops from Iraq within a
year, give more than four thousand dollars to every
university student, stop tax cuts for the super rich
who do not need it but give the tax cuts to the poor,
provide healthcare for all, and speak to friends and
enemies alike to find ways of normalising relations,
making the world safer, more democratic and more
affluent are policies that should be supported by all
Americans and by those of us in other parts of the
world who love America.
I agree with you that both candidates are good but I
maintain that Obama is the better candidate.
Biko
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Regardless of your candidate preference, your so-called 'expert' analysis of
the debate performance of Senator Clinton in respect of her disposition to
the camera and Senator Obama at last night's debate was clearly off base and
inaccurate. Clearly, both candidates had moments of brilliance and the
overall quality of the debate was civil, intense, passionate, and at-times
quite jocular.
As one who teaches classes on broadcast journalism; and press and politics,
I am writing however to take issue with your sociological analysis of the
visual grammar of television in relation to Mrs Clinton's presentation at
the debate. At the risk of tedium, I will not recount the many fallacies in
your posting about political communication and performance television. But
here is an example of what you wrote:
"The difference is a performance strategic blunder for Clinton who spoke
as if addressing the camera, making the viewer to see her as possibly
overbearing, making Obama to appear more agreeable and more focused.
This is a basic rule of the motion picture camera, you are told to
ignore it and speak directly to people especially if you are going to be
on screen for a long time. Obama was ready for the task, Clinton was
not." [Biko Agozino].
Well, you are quite wrong with this conception. An elementary rule of
political communication here is that candidates in a televised debate
setting - as we saw last night with both Senator Clinton and Senator Obama -
were servicing multiple constituencies with their political speech. Thus
they were there to make connections not just with the audience in the
auditorium, their opponent, the panel of interviewers, but more importantly
the broadcast audience (the viewer). And you speak to the broadcast audience
by making eye contact with the camera or looking into the general direction
of the camera - which is the horizon of the audience in the auditorium!
In fact, it is quite possible for the debaters not to be aware of the
placement of the camera because there are typically multiple cameras
covering an event of this nature. As speech performers it is highly unlikely
that they will be in a position to know which camera was on them at any one
time because the technical coordination and directing of what shots get on
air lie in the hands of a technical director who is in a production truck
out of visual range. Any attempt by a speech performer to game the camera by
guessing which one was selecting a particular frame or shot was more than
likely therefore to be severely disorienting. Doing so would most certainly
result in a speech disaster. Clearly, this was not the case at yesterday's
debate in the case of Mrs Clinton, contrary to Biko's assertion. Indeed her
most brilliant moment of the night took place in her closing remarks when
she answered the question about the crises of her life. The warmth of
response of the audience to that answer, underscored by a standing ovation,
turned what was otherwise an already strong performance into perhaps a
humanistic valedictory and concession of her defeat in the quest for the
Oval Office.
From this brief illustration, it is clear to me that our esteemed brother,
Biko, allowed his infatuation and fascination with Senator Obama to corrupt
his sociological analysis of the debate. As far as the visual grammar of
television is concerned, he clearly doesn't know much about television. And
for the record, let me just say briefly that there is a reason why the panel
of interviewers are shot in profile, not frontally, but we do not have time
to go into that here.
PS: By the way, I too support the candidacy of Mr. Obama over Mrs. Clinton.
Thank you.
Folu F. Ogundimu, Ph.D.
From: USAAfric...@googlegroups.com on behalf of Toyin Falola
Sent: Thu 2/21/2008 6:35 PM
To: USAAfric...@googlegroups.com
I can only leave you with one message,things are not
always what they seem.A people deserves what ever
leadership they get at any point in time. Whether
Obama or Clinton wins, Americans will only get
somebody who represent the collection of their overt
and covert aspirations and volitions at any point in
time. There is no accident in History. All the
candidates stand a good chance of becoming the best
president,circumstances and events will determine
that.
But before you venture into lectures on tele
communications next time ,try and see Folu for some
education in this area.I agree with the person who
wrote that debate you watched must have been a
different one from the one the rest of us watched.
Best Wishes,
Nkolika'
Nigeria.
Thanks for your lecture on television language. Sorry
to butt into your turf but my point is not academic in
terms of how you teach journalism in the classroom. I
was writing as a political strategist who knows that
something is going wrong with Mrs. Clinton's campaign
but few people seem to know why. I identified the flaw
in her inattentiveness to questions posed to her
compared to the concentration of her opponent, Mr.
Obama.
For your students in journalism, you could give the
kind of lecture you presented below but for
politicians, you will need to be more practical. In
your journalism classes, for example, you may ask
students to read textbooks without asking them to read
television performances to guide politicians in the
heat of a contest the way that I have done with the
eyes of a practitioner who has television credits as a
performer, researcher, producer, director, editor,
writer, presenter and reviewer, besides also being a
sociologist. For you to assert that I do not know
'anything' about television or that I am 'infatuated'
with Mr. Obama is to display your delusional
imagination to which I will not respond.
What I would like to do briefly is to point out where
you seem to agree with me. The interviewers were not
staring into the cameras and you say that you know why
they were given profile shots; neither was Mr. Obama
staring, but Mrs. Clinton was staring even though you
said that it was difficult for her to know which
camera was focusing on her, and that trying to find
the camera to stare into would be disorienting (my
point exactly) but you did not say why this was the
bulk of her presentation strategy.
We also agree that both candidates are good but I
insist that one is better, the one you claim to also
support, Mr. Obama.
How can 'one who teaches courses on broadcast
journalism' like you interpret the closing standing
ovation as an applause for Mrs. Clinton even after Ms
Brown, one of the interviewers, correctly announced
that it was a standing ovation for both candidates? At
the same time you agreed with me that her closing
remarks sounded like a concession speech. Since when
did anyone get a standing ovation for conceding defeat
or is the standing ovation not more for the winning
candidate?
It is all right for us to interpret an event like the
debate differently without engaging in personal
attacks and turf warfare. We all saw the same debate
but we are entitled to interpret it differently
without being swayed by powerful spin doctors.
Biko
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One important point though is that Hillary loves
facing the audience, whether at debates or political
rallies, and she likes nodding her head after a good
talk in expectation of a resounding applause- a times
it comes at other times it does not. You may be
correct that she did not know the camera that was
facing her. But in some cases, interviewees are told
where their camera is located. But the University of
Texas, Austin debate unlike previous debates was an
uphill task for Hillary not so much because she did
not speak well ( I believe she did), but because the
expectation was higher. She is a debate freak, and
Obama. Not because Obama cannot debate but because he
finds it distractive and a tactical maneuver by a long
standing front runner to slow down his momentum. Some
how many Hillary fans and supporters had expected that
she was going to come out of that debate thorouging
trashing Obama, but in the end she was sober and
humbled, if not traumatised. The "human side of
Hillary", a reinvention of the New Hampshire narrative
which had worked then as a campaign strategy was
merely acknowledge in Austin without any persuasive
meaning. Did it sing her nunc dimitis because it
sounded valedictory? No. But it meant that for the
first time, Hillary was reading the political
barometer, and that is highly suggestive. She knew as
well as did the listening audience that the
groundswell and balance of forces was not in her
favour. But they empathy towards her, hence the
standing and resounding ovation she received. Does she
think the game is up? Like Mike Huckebee she is also
betting on miracles, just like any other good
believer; while simultaneously preparing for an
honourable exit and safe/soft landing.
But the Obama/Hillary debacle point to wider issues in
politics which space and time would not permit me to
discuss: about how not to take opponents and
electorate for granted; how not to talk down to people
(Americans call it "how not to run your mouth"); how
to be humble and comported; how not to over-exagerate
your capacity; how not to reinvent your credentials of
service, how not to flip-flop while on the attacking
line against an opponent; and how to be civil even
when you attack and how to get the right message and
the correct resonance with the electorate.
This is not the time and place to do a postmortem on
Hillary neither am I giving a funereal dirge. But
Tiyambe Zeleza, has put the entire Obama/Hillary
debacle in contest and has also cautioned us about
what to expect if Obama were to win. I urge we all
re-read his excellent piece which appeared on this
listserve 3 days ago.
Finally, following from a Socratic epistemological
genre, which emphasises the doxa (opinion), there can
only be multiple opinions in the quest/search for
truth. An opinion is not necessarily and/or cannot be
a substitute for truth. I cannot disqualify anybody's
viewpoint on this listserve by claiming that mine is
the truth. All that I can say is that I have expressed
a viewpoint, an opinion. I guess that when we
internalise this mode of exchange we will be more
tolerant of each other's point of view. Perhaps, that
is why Hillary ended her remarks by stating how
"honoured" she was to have shared a common platform
with Obama, because it was both a "War of words, and a
war of Position".
My position, at the risk of misrepresentation, is that
we can well make our point without being judgmental.
And I find this in the position of my very good friend
and professional colleague, Nkolika, yourself and
Simon. Additionally, you did not need to remind us
that you are Obama supporter. There is nothing wrong
in being Clinton's supporter and I do not believe it
is fair to demonise her, as Nkolika rightly stated.
However, I recall that very early on this listserve
when I was pushing the position that Obama's
candidacy was very strong and different in its message
and organisational approach, many wrote me off as an
arm-chair theorist, and that what I said was a hearsay
and amounted to noonday hallucination. They were
fixated to the point that racism will NEVER make
America vote for a Black candidate. And I made one
important point then viz, that I will not be one of
those Black folks who will wait until Obama fails to
get the nomination before turning round to
uncritically blame it on his race.Rather that I will
seek to explain or analyse why white folks are voting
form him and why he is having a rising profile
nationally. I said this soon after Iowa Caucuses and
before New Hampshire primary. My core point then was
that I was inspired by Lenin's instruction
thus:"concrete analysis of concrete situation"!!!
Let the conversation continue.
Abu
--- Folu Ogundimu <ogun...@msu.edu> wrote:
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