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Patrick

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Jul 21, 2020, 5:31:36 PM7/21/20
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There was a young lady from Kent
Whose nose was most awfully bent.
She followed her nose,
One day, I suppose,
And no one knows which way she went.

Nathan Ace

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Oct 8, 2020, 6:25:20 AM10/8/20
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Meaning to be helpful, but - I'd say either change nose to conk in line
two or replace three and four with lines containing a bit more
development of theme/ action? It's currently that you've brought this
nose in in line two and then the word appears again in a sort of running
on the spot effect in the next line. Do you see what I mean?

I don't suppose it matters, and you're probably gone. I'm even a bit
worried that you're me and that I posted that limerick during a rum
blackout.

Best wishes,

L, Gravesend.

Patrick

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Oct 8, 2020, 6:43:24 PM10/8/20
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‘Off with his head!’

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Somewhat Nostalgic

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Oct 9, 2020, 10:27:20 AM10/9/20
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There is a much more vulgar version of this. It includes Kent, bent and went :-)
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