Thanks for the comments aszyre. I have decided on the variant of the deck I will be using while I fine tune it.
This one has gotten 6/2 in the latest war, winning 20+ points for me almost every time. (the points were 118 won and 66 lost) so it seems there are no people surrendering versus this deck.
The way I designed it I was focusing on trying to eliminate threat of my cards dying from strike decks, and be able to break through a righteous slowroll. I haven't really kept in mind any other decks. The kleave protect one gets rid of a lot of the chance of tazerok dying from being played early vs. a strike deck then the tazerok is free to kill everything with the rally it gets, and for that reason I rather like it.
Another win scenario from what I can tell is hope mason being rallied and going straight to commander with flurry, like a rhino.
UB is there to help break through protect and armor with pierce and then the valor (seeing as this is a 3 card deck)
About the homebrew defense deck beating stuff reliably, I completely agree. I made this because I saw potential in tazerok and I had no other options I could make a good defense deck with with my card pool.
Also, I would absolutely love some shuddering keep... That would be awesome. Cards I think that could help this deck succeed from what I know of it are shuddering keep and zarak.
Aszyre, I'm not sure whether what you said in your last post would apply to the new deck I made so I'm going to re-ask for comments and ideas and such.