comment from Mr Akhir.

[nur fathiah Kamaruddin]

Hi guys,

ni comment dari mr akhir.die baru reply tadi. so kite mcm ade problem dkt financial statement. mcm mne ek?

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From: Akhir Sharif <akhir....@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, Aug 26, 2012 at 1:06 PM
Subject: Re: PF COURSEWORK SCORE
To: nur fathiah Kamaruddin <tyah.ka...@gmail.com>


I have identified the flow of the write up. Try to answer the question in red in a direct and specific manner. To the point rather than long flowery manner. You have the answer in the various paragraph marked in colours. Try to improve them and connect the flow with one another.

Your financial statement is not right. You have to reconstruct them.

Md Akhir Mohd Sharif

On Sun, Aug 26, 2012 at 11:02 AM, nur fathiah Kamaruddin <tyah.ka...@gmail.com> wrote:

Ok sir. If you do not have time to give comment, its ok=) Just send this file for your review. Thanks a lot

On Sat, Aug 25, 2012 at 2:29 AM, Akhir Sharif <akhir....@gmail.com> wrote:

Let me see. I will try to give input if I have the time. I got to go to Alor Setar for a wedding tomorrow (day trip), then Tanjung Malim on Sunday.

Md Akhir Mohd Sharif

On Sat, Aug 25, 2012 at 2:25 AM, nur fathiah Kamaruddin <tyah.ka...@gmail.com> wrote:

thank you sir! i'm currently doing the slide for TTP project. Could you help me to review the executive summary and the financial projection of the project?

On Sat, Aug 25, 2012 at 2:08 AM, Akhir Sharif <akhir....@gmail.com> wrote:

Dear Fathiah,

Your PF coursework score is  53.8/60. 

The Groupwork score is  18.6/20

Md Akhir Mohd Sharif

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Nur Fathiah Binti Kamaruddin
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Bandar Seri Iskandar,
31750 Tronoh, Perak Darul Ridzuan.

 

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Nur Fathiah Binti Kamaruddin
Business Information System

Universiti Teknologi PETRONAS,
Bandar Seri Iskandar,
31750 Tronoh, Perak Darul Ridzuan.

 

want to know more about CSR, a project of SIFE of YEC UTP?
visit us here :
http://csr.sifeutp.org/ and http://www.facebook.com/csrsifeutp

 

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Nur Fathiah Binti Kamaruddin
Business Information System

Universiti Teknologi PETRONAS,
Bandar Seri Iskandar,
31750 Tronoh, Perak Darul Ridzuan.

 

want to know more about CSR, a project of SIFE of YEC UTP?
visit us here :
http://csr.sifeutp.org/ and http://www.facebook.com/csrsifeutp

 

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