Tree Poem

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Apr 19, 2013, 7:13:44 AM4/19/13
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Write a poem that captures the beauty of the trees that are blooming over our heads as we have class outside this week.  Be sure to be as specific as possible when describing the scene.

Mr. L

HAI LUN MEI

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Apr 20, 2013, 7:06:29 PM4/20/13
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               Spring Time
We sitting on the grassing lawn

Observing things around a spring morning

Gazing at the blossom trees

Cherry blossoms growing on the trees

Waving at me would a morning breeze

Like cotton balls crumpled together

Let me know spring is here

JIA YIN HUANG

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Apr 20, 2013, 11:37:05 PM4/20/13
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Spring is coming

Outside
It's a symbol of freedom
The breeze blowing with the breath of spring

As close as possible to the nature
sitting on the grass
under the blooming tree
listen to the presenter
poetry mix into the air

tree is blooming
grass is green
flowers are pretty
the only drawback is body trembling
legs lose the feeling

Is that too boring?maybe
Is that too focusing? maybe
the reason is
outside is so pretty
And spring is coming

Freedom of speaking
Freedom of listening
Freedom of spring

CUI JIN LU

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Apr 21, 2013, 2:07:44 PM4/21/13
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                 Breath of Spring
                         by Lu CuiJin
 
          A year's plan starts with spring
          A day's plan starts in the morning
          Under the blue sky
          We like flowers sitting on the lawn
         
          The wind bring the spring in the air
          The trees are in flower
          Faces smiling at us
          Our emotions permeated in the air
         
 
          
 
        
        
 

JIA HUANG WEI

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Apr 21, 2013, 2:42:58 PM4/21/13
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                                                                        Tree
                                                                     lovely Tree
                                                                swing in the wind
                                                             blooms over our head
                                                           for the comming summer
                                                       oh Tree inspire our peotry lover
                                                    in you prosperous  fragrant blossom 
                                                 in pink yellow purple all above and below                       
                                                                       with'us
                                                                     let'be loud
                                                                   let'be passion

MING SHI ZOU

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Apr 21, 2013, 3:12:27 PM4/21/13
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Praise of spring

 

We are going to outside

The wind makes the grass green

We sitting on the grass lawn

Look up and saw the blue sky and birds

Tree is blooming

Birds are singing

Flowers are dancing

The earthworms are walking

They are praise the arrival of spring

WEN BIN CHEN

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Apr 21, 2013, 3:15:53 PM4/21/13
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Spring tell me
 
We sitting under your child
His name is Tree
Why he stay here and look like cry?
You tell me that was his life
And he's never cry
 
We sitting under your child
He's watching our life
We sing and dance for our class
He's watching our style
And he alaways smail
 
 

XIAOYAN ZHANG

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Apr 21, 2013, 5:30:15 PM4/21/13
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          Spring has quietly came

  Spring wears a bright colored sweater,
  Students are sitting under the tree.
  The flowers bloom in this weather,
  The treetop is green.

  The air still cold and fresh,
  Listen!
  They are reading a poetry,
  How a lovely day start.

  The wind kisses our face,
  With the fragrance of flowers.
  The pink petal's falling down,
  becoming a great emerging phenomenon.

JUN HAO FENG

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Apr 21, 2013, 5:51:53 PM4/21/13
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Beauty of Spring

Sitting under the tree
Singing, Reciting, Performing
Enjoying the free air
watching, screaming, touching
the concert of worm

The Spring is coming
The flower is blooming
The tree is singing
The grass is dancing
The beauty of Spring

ZHI YI ZHANG

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Apr 21, 2013, 5:53:01 PM4/21/13
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setted under of the tree
grass is growing under feet
beauty sound surroud ears
flowers fall like trees treas
 
wind blowing to the face
best give from the trees
understand what why happen in earth
like slove a dozen puzzle of the quiz
 
 
lying down to the floor
watch the flowers fall
beauty pitcture ever saw
thank earth for that all
 
 
 

PANG YEN WU

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Apr 21, 2013, 5:55:05 PM4/21/13
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Big tree cover our seat 
We sitting with the worm 
talking with the grass
playing with the rock
concentrate at those fun thing
whole space is surrounding by the poem reciting sound
we are hugging the spring

ZHAO FENG TUNG

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Apr 21, 2013, 6:00:15 PM4/21/13
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 Beautiful Spring Day

 Spring is here
 Shining under the sun
 The flower blooming there

 before the sun
 there were fresh air and bird
 flying around under the sun

 Standing under the bird
 Spreading the ballad
 Sweet with the bird

 Everyone listen the ballad
 And we enjoy the ballad.

YIWEN JIANG

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Apr 21, 2013, 8:13:25 PM4/21/13
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Spring

The first of the four seasons,
Season for all things grow.
Plant germinate and grow,

We go outside,
overflowing flower;
Ying's singing voice wind around.
Birds singing with her;
Aircraft flying in the sky;
helicopters sound --- rumbled;

the cold wind blowing gently,
Grass crying,
We sat on their body,
make them can not be unbend the waist pole,
Can not grow up;

YING ZHOU

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Apr 21, 2013, 9:58:48 PM4/21/13
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a newly blooming tree greet the hot summer
we activate our brain through the presentation
fresh air applauding for the shy presenter
blue sky listening with respectful attention


breath carefully
worry catch keynote to comment
performance begin
nervous everyone lose concentration in this moment




 

JIA HUI LI

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Apr 21, 2013, 10:18:14 PM4/21/13
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Spring

Spring ,spring , you bring us  a colorful world。
We go outside to feel how Beautiful you are。
Flowers are Sing  ,grasses are dancing 。
We are listening  ,and the Breeze touching our faces。
Spring, spring ,we love you。

KUNJUN JIANG

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Apr 23, 2013, 5:19:34 PM4/23/13
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              Tree Poem
Blooming in the beauty spring
Swing their body in the wind
Dew on petal, shine by sun
Like a beauty with glisten gem
Start the graceful dance
Leap, spin and flutter
Gently land on speaker's hair

BERRIN VAROL

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Apr 29, 2013, 9:38:24 PM4/29/13
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Spring is here 
here to motivate us 
every thing has more meaning 
when its spring 

the beautiful smell of the trees,
the nice view when the leaves,
come together with the wind
and the awesome felling you got when you studying,

this all telling you that,
Spring is here. 

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