Descriptive Paragraph

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Directions: Write a paragraph that describes what is happening in the picture.  Include as many details as you can.  Someone who reads your paragraph should be able to imagine the entire scene.  Before you start writing,look at the picture carefully and think about the following:

·What is the setting?

·Who are the people and what are they doing?

·What might these people be thinking or feeling? 

[KAI CHEN]

The weather is getting cold, and the air pollution is very serious. People cant see the people very clearly even the next street. Li Mei wears a overcoat and goes to work by her bike. When she stops on the sidewalk for wait traffic signal. She meets her friends Chen Hong and Dong Mei. They both wear the sweater, and ride the bike, too. Dong Mei doesn't bring any thing,but Chen Hong bring her lunch and other two bags. When the traffic signal turn green, they cross the street together. While they cross the street, they cant see the people and car in next street. Li Mei talks to the Chen Hong whose behind her,' how does the air of the city become like now.' Chen Hong doesn't answer her. Done Mei turns the head to see the next street, but cant see clearly, too. The red light signal also cant see very clearly.

[MING SHI ZOU]

     In Beijing, the air pollution is very serious. Morning, three women riding  bike are going to work, and the sky is overcast, people can't see the traffic lights, even can't see the people within 10 meters away. And the transportation officials also trying to divert and arrangements traffic conditions. Three women are talking about the weather in Beijing, and they are complaining about the bad weather, and air quality in Beijing.

[JIA HUANG WEI]

It is the most cloudy day in Beijing, the whole city is clad in mist . The stree is full of fogs, the air is wet and cool ,and the ground is slippy ; Cars are not allowed to go on the stress because visibility is too poor ,but his situation does not stop people from going out. Lisa, Nisa and Nisa's daugther Misa go to work by bikes as usual. They are acrossing highway and there are a lots of people about 20 feet far away on their right ; Shan and Chan feel easier now than when they left house because they can see the indistinct shape of the factory in front of them. They keep riding straight forward but Misa slows down and turns her head to the right ; The surrounding seems so strange to the girl who used to live in HongKong,she is impressed by the variety of the weather in BeiJing and the speed people adapt it.

[YIWEN JIANG]

The early morning sun has risen, but pedestrians on the road is still can not see the road  because today's  thick fog.The formation of fog in the city because of human activities. Morning and evening is the peak of the heating boiler discharge of large quantities of fume suspended solids and car exhaust and other pollutants, make deterioration in air quality. Li ping and her neighbors made ​​an appointment to go out together,their transport modes is bike because it protect the environment. Li, ping very carefully watching around the vehicle passes through, but because of the heavy fog, even street lights not see,so she rode exceptionally careful and remind to her neighbors. But two of her neighbors has indifference, they just want to hurry to where they work.

[KUNJUN JIANG]

     The air pollution in Benjing is very severe, it makes the area mist. A is biking on a road,they are going to visit their grandmother. She is worrying about the road condition, and she was afraid to bump into something or someone. B was following A's way, she is thinking  about what she will cook for her grandmom later. C is looking at the right of the road, woundering if she could discern the building across the street. 

[HAI LUN MEI]

The air in Beijing is like a smoking room. The air smells turbid like the smoke. The weather is cold when you walking in outside, so the people all wearing the jacket and they are complaining about the air.  Ping, Hua and Lin are riding bikes go to their working place; they are hard to breathe because the bad air will go into their noses. If they open the mouth, the air tastes like a cup of bitter tea. The fog like a white cloth to blocking their eyes, they cannot clear look at the front. Lin is turning her face to look at around, she feels hard.  And they want to be able to quickly improve the air quality. To sum up, the air in Beijing is too trouble and harm people‘s health.

[JIA YIN HUANG]

 This is an early morning in Beijing, the fog covers the entire city. The road is hard to see. Mei-mei , Qian-qian and Ling-ling ride bicycle to the company. Today they carry their lunch boxes with them. Usually the air in the morning is fresher than other times.  But today the air smells differently, not because those ladies have lunch boxes with them. That smell likes blood mix with air. This weather is hard to make people feel comfortable and air is so damp.The weather makes people feel sleepy in the morning. Ling-ling hears the noise comes from a distance. That noise catches Ling-ling's attention. She wants to know why do so many people crowed in there? Is there has a car accident? Mei-mei and Qian-qian can't hear that noise and they want to hurry to reach the company because if they stop to ride the bike they will late to work.

[MARISOL GERMAN]

Other day as always in Beijing the day look gloomy there is a lot  of fog because the air pollution . Teresa and her two sister  who are crossing the street with a bike  in their way to work can not  even see people one block away,as Teresa and her two sisters are crossing the street  one of Teresa sister stared at people wondering   why people do not make a choice to change their environment that looks like a room full of dust ,  and feels like a poison inside their bodies that is killing them little by little.

[JIA HUI LI]

Today in BeiJing is a fog day，fog cover whole city。People can‘t see each other clearly，so the car is not allowed to use。some people have walk or take bus to the place they work for，but Jing ，Xuan，Ying are cycling to their Company 。The air is wet and cold，jing wear a greed coat，Xuan wear a black sweater，Ying wear a bule  thick vest。Jing and Xuan are fast than Ying ，because Ying is looking for people in her right side。

[ZHI YI ZHANG]

“Wan, time is up, we need go now” Jh is calling the Wan stop looking around. Today seems like a “nice” day for Beijing. Wan is feeling better than other day. Finally she can keeping the mask at home and sees the buildings that cross the street. Cycling to work is not the daily life anymore for Wan, and seems the people walk on street is even hardened. Smiling of air is better today, but still she can smell something. Wan is thinking the developed counties, like China, didn’t care that much about environment? Wan wish that moving to  the country side instant keeping stay here.

[JUN HAO FENG]

   On a regular morning in Beijing, the fog,the poisonous venom, inundates the city and eats away the life of the people; however, this can not stop people from going to work because their family need them.  Ashley and her two friends are the preys of this heinous monster.  Before they go to work, they protect themselves as much as possible.  They wear coats, longs sleeve shirt, and long pants to insure that most of their body is covered and safe from the dripping venom of the pollution.  The women who are going to work ride the bike slowly and carefully because the air pollution is so thick that they can not see what is 10 feet ahead of them.  Amy, the second women, tries to follow Ashley as best as she can since Amy can barely see the road.  Another friend, Lissandra, who is going to work with Ashley and Amy takes her time on the road.  She slows down, looks at the distance and wonders about the sun.  She knows that the sun supposes to rise up from the horizon, but she can not finds a trace of the sun light.  People's hearts, not just those women's but all the people's that live in Beijing, sink because the pollution is getting worse and worse.  The disappearing of the sun is the omen that squelch the last hope inside people's heart.

[ZHAO FENG TUNG]

On the freezing holiday day, some people being lazy and some people is ambitious. Meanwhile, Cindy, Alice, and Lissandra don't have day off and they ride bike to work. Although Cindy is suffering from her bed, but she has to go to work. Cindy turn to her right side to look because so many noises there that made her left behind her neighbors. Alice don't care about the noise over there, so she keep riding to work that she don't want to lose her job by late. Lissandra is wondering about the fog in this morning. She is getting tired by carrying her lunch box on her bike and her heavy coat.  

[PANG YEN WU]

In Beijing the air  is very dirty. But in the fog there are three woman riding their bike on the street they are going to buy the food for there family. Jin  bring other two family member with her to buy the food for the lunch ,dinner and breakfast, they all riding very carefully because in the pollution air you can not see the road very clear and Jin feels that not comfortable because she is tired of the buying food everyday she is tired so on her face it shows that she want to go home fast as soon as possible the other two woman has the feeling too but more way to don't care.

[SAMANTHA SUAREZ NUNEZ]

       In the afternoon at Beijing a strong storm is about to begin.It was a cloudy day and it was raining.The population is very serious and dangerous.The people cant even walk in the street because nobody cant see because of the damage that the population is causing.There are three woman.They are chinese woman.They look like they really like to do exercise.Salma is wearing a black coat,blue pants and the brown big boots.She is with her two friends riding the bikes in a weat road,Jenna and Vanessa.Jenna she is wearing a black long t shirt with dark pants and black shoes.She is also carrying a white bag with food inside of it.And around her shoulder shes carrying a small purse.Now Vanessa she didnt bring anything she was just riding the bike with the girls  for they could get to the place quickly.They were going to another town of china.They were exciting that they were together and very happy that they are finally getting out of town because the population was affecting everyone.

[BERRIN VAROL]

Couple months ago air pollution was a trouble in Beijing, this effected many people for their health's. Lot of them start coughing as soon as they went out. Many people start to go out less than before and when they need to they either go with transportations or their bikes. Bike is not really a good idea because you still feeling the air but also you can go faster than the people who walk. So in picture 3 women has to get out from their house for a reason and they all neighbors, they want it to reach where they want to as soon as possible because what they're feeling is a bad air that affects them. They also watching the people who walk while they biking and feeling bad for them because even the kids are out there,and this air might effect them faster. 

[SHAIMAA IBRAHIM]

Early in the morning ,three girls were riding their bikes on Beijing's streets to deliever the order that they had from their company. The fog smelled so scary because they barely see the road in front of them while Sandy slowed down to look at the great shadow view of the building across the fog that got her attention ,but Magi and Molly were already sick off from that horrible air pollution. They might be so depress because they feel that they won't long in their country .

[YING ZHOU]

Sara is riding bike on the way to work, she is afraid the boss cut her pay if she late, she knows find a new job in Beijing is very hard. she tires to ride bike slowly because turbid air blocking her view. Rose wants to speed up to discuss the weather with Sara, with the development of industry, air pollution is getting more and serious, she hears a news that government devise proposals to deal with air pollution. And for some reason the distance between her and Sara is constantly. Jane is get closer to them, but the crowd catchs her attention and slows her down, she tries to memories about how long she hasn't see the shushine
in Beijing, and people are walking across the street like a normal day, she begin to question why she has to do the same process with living in the terrible circumstance. she knows worse and worse pollution is erode people's happiness little by little.

[XIAOYAN ZHANG]

 Mr.L

      This is a foggy day in Beijing , the weather still cold and it will be getting colder on next few days.  Ming, Qin and Ling always get up before the sunrise , and they are riding their bicycle to their restaurant. Out side is a little bit dark in heavy fog , so they can not ride fast . There also haven't a car , maybe the cars don't allow to through during the morning. Ming rides ahead of Qin and Ling and she wears a dark green jacket and blue jeans, she is looking ahead and thinking of they must be hurry up before the people and bicycles are getting more. Qin rides behind of Ming and she is carrying a small bag and a box of fruits, she is thinking of what she need to prepare when they arrived the restaurant, also she feels asleep. Ling is the slowest one, she is looking right , there are many people are walking across the road. Some of them might go the work or some of them might to do exercises. She is thinking of the weather of Beijing is getting worst.