Sound Devices in Group Poem

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Find three sound devices in your book group poem.  Report them in a response to this post.  DO NOT USE: onomatopoeia, end rhyme, or true rhyme in your response.   

[KAI CHEN]

Slant Rhyme:  Adjusts itself to Midnight --
                     And Life steps almost straight

the midnight and straight both end with "ight".

assonance: As when the Neighbor holds the Lamp

neighbor and hold both have "o" and sound the same.

alliteration: Adjusts itself to Midnight --

                  And Life steps almost straight. 

adjusts , and ,and almost all begin with 'a'.

[JUN HAO FENG]

Onomatopoeia:

         Thou still unravish'd bride of quietness, 
    Thou foster-child of silence and slow time, 

Assonance:

       Or mountain-built with peaceful citadel, 

        Is emptied of this folk, this pious morn? 
And, little town, thy streets for evermore 
    Will silent be; and not a soul to tell 
        Why thou art desolate, can e'er return.

Slant Rhyme:

     Heard melodies are sweet, but those unheard 

    Are sweeter: therefore, ye soft pipes, play on; 
Not to the sensual ear, but, more endear'd, 
    Pipe to the spirit ditties of no tone:

[YING ZHOU]

Assonance :Breathin in deep city breaths, sittin on shitty step

Consonance:My narrative, rose to explain this existance   Amidst the harbor lights which remain in the distance

Alliteration:1)Killers Born Naturally like, Mickey and Mallory

                     2) Felt the spirit in the wind, knew my friend was gone for good

[JIA HUI LI]

assonance ; Upon those boughs which shake against the cold, 

alliteration:This thou perceivest, which makes thy love more strong,

                 To love that well which thou must leave ere long.

repetition ;Which by and by black night doth take away,

[HAI LUN MEI]

Alliteration: What I was walling in or walling out

Consonance： but spring mending time we find them there.

Internal Rhyme: where there are cows? But here there are no cows.

[PANG YEN WU]

alliteration:When yellow leaves, or none, or few, do hang

Upon those boughs which shake against the cold,

Bare ruin’d choirs, where late the sweet birds sang.
In me thou seest the twilight of such day
As after sunset fadeth in the west,

assonance:When yellow leaves, or none, or few, do hang

Upon those boughs which shake against the cold,

Bare ruin’d choirs, 

consonance:That on the ashes of his youth doth lie,

[YING ZHOU]

Mending Wall

consonance:"Stay where you are until our backs are turned!" 

                          My apple trees will never get across 
Alliteration:In each hand, like an old-stone savage armed.  

Assonance:No one has seen them made or heard them made

[MING SHI ZOU]

Alliteration: What I was walling in or walling out.

Consonance: Where there are cows? But here there are no cows.

Before I built a wall I'd ask to know.

Assonance: In each hand, like an old-stone savage armed.

[MING SHI ZOU]

Alliteration: What I was walling in or walling out.

 

Assonance: Where there are cows? But here there are no cows.

[ZHAO FENG TUNG]

Assonance: One on a side. It comes to little more

Internal Rhyme: Where they have left not one stone on a stone

Alliteration: He said it for himself. I see him there

[YIWEN JIANG]

Approximate:“Heard melodies are sweet, but those unheard   

                     Are sweeter; therefore, ye soft pipes, play on;   

                    Not to the sensual ear, but, more endear'd, ”

Consonance:“Fair youth, beneath the trees, thou canst not leave 

                    Thy song, nor ever can those trees be bare; ”

Assonance:“THOU still unravish'd bride of quietness,   

                  Thou foster-child of Silence and slow time, ”

[JIA HUANG WEI]

Alliteration;  doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before

Assonance; open here i flung the shutter ,when ,with many a flirt and flutter.

Consonance; in there stepped a stately Raven of saintly days of yore.

[JIA YIN HUANG]

Assonance:

 

If thou be'st born to strange sights,
Things invisible to see,

 

Though at next door we might meet,
Though she were true, when you met her,

Eye Rhyme:

 

Though she were true, when you met her,
And last, till you write your letter,

Approximate Rhyme:

 

GO and catch a falling star,
Get with child a mandrake root,
Tell me where all past years are,

Thou, when thou return'st, wilt tell me,
All strange wonders that befell thee,

 

And swear,
No where
Lives a woman true and fair.

 

 

 

[ZHI YI ZHANG]

Assonance: No one has seen them made or heard them made

Internal Rhyme: Where they have left not one stone on a stone

consonance:And some are loaves and some so nearly balls 

[MARISOL GERMAN]

Marisol German                                                                                                                                                          ESS1QT3

march/12/13                                                                                                                                                                class;858

Forth Hamilton High School                                                                                                                                         Mr. Loudon 

Consonance= Bold lover,never,never,canst thou kiss.

 

Assonance =Thy song, nor ever can those trees be bare

Alliteration =All breathing human passion far above

[KUNJUN JIANG]

Approximate Rhyme：
            And swear,
            No where

Alliteration：

If thou be'st born to strange sights,
Things invisible to see,

Assonance：
Teach me to hear mermaids singing,
Or to keep off envy's stinging,

[XIN YANG]

Assonance:

“THOU still unravish'd bride of quietness,

Thou foster-child of Silence and slow time, ”

 

Slant:

“Heard melodies are sweet, but those unheard

Are sweeter; therefore, ye soft pipes, play on;

Not to the sensual ear, but, more endear'd, ”

Consonance:

“Fair youth, beneath the trees, thou canst not leave

Thy song, nor ever can those trees be bare; ”

 

 

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[XIAOYAN ZHANG]

Alliteration: If thou be'st born to strange sights.

Hyperbole:Ride ten thousand days and nights,

Rhyme Schemes: GO and catch a falling star,

                           Get with child a mandrake root.

                           Tell me where all past years are,

                           Or who cleft the devil's foot.

[CUI JIN LU]

The Raven

     by Edgar Allan Poe

 

 

Assonance: Nothing further then he uttered——not a feather then he fluttered.

 

Consonance:Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering,fearing.

 

Alliteration:  Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before.

[KATTABEK IBRAIMOV]

Consonance:

bold lover,never,never,canst thou kiss.

Alliteration:

All breathing human passion far above.

[BERRIN VAROL]

Assonance:GO and catch a falling star,
Get with child a mandrake root,

Tell me where all past years are,

Or who cleft the devil's foot,

Teach me to hear mermaids singing,
Or to keep off envy's stinging,

            And find
            What wind
Serves to advance an honest mind.

EYE RYHME

If thou find'st one, let me know, (Approximate rhyme)
Such a pilgrimage were sweet;
Yet do not, I would not go,(Approximate rhyme)

Though at next door we might meet,
Though she were true, when you met her,

And last, till you write your letter,

            Yet she(Approximate rhyme)
            Will be(Approximate rhyme)
False, ere I come, to two, or three. 

[SHAIMAA IBRAHIM]

Internal rhyme: but the fact is i was napping , and so gently you came rapping

Assonance: once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered weak and weary

Alliteration: from my books surcease of sorrow -sorrow for the lost lenore