Snow Cinquian

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blo...@fthamiltonhs.org

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Mar 8, 2013, 7:50:54 AM3/8/13
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Write an american cinquain about snow in March.
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HAI LUN MEI

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Mar 8, 2013, 7:10:27 PM3/8/13
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Snowy

Crystal soft

They are falling

Decorative things in around

Icy

ZHAO FENG TUNG

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Mar 8, 2013, 8:46:53 PM3/8/13
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Snowflake
White, Frosty
Dancing, Freezing, Covering
They are hiding a new living thing
Cold



JIA HUANG WEI

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Mar 9, 2013, 1:03:21 PM3/9/13
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silently,the white snow falling
a class is out for a lesson
feel its form , its pure ,its beauty , its gentle.
but while appreciating the moment, time is gone
only wish still it fall ,and fall,and fall.

CUI JIN LU

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Mar 9, 2013, 4:16:54 PM3/9/13
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March of snow
 
Tender ,beautiful
 
Dancing,singing,falling
 

Flapping the beat of life

Brilliant

 
 
 
 
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JIA YIN HUANG

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Mar 9, 2013, 7:42:59 PM3/9/13
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          Buds
 
Buds
Cryptic, unconspicuous
struggling, growthing, pullulating
Against to the chilliness
Vitality
 
{Didactic Cinquain}

JIA YIN HUANG

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Mar 9, 2013, 7:44:58 PM3/9/13
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     Snow       
 
Snow                                  
Soft, pure                             
Drifting, covering, lying          
Celebrating spring is coming 
Beauty                                
 
{Didactic Cinquain}
 
        

MING SHI ZOU

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Mar 9, 2013, 9:13:28 PM3/9/13
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Falling
 
Covering all of the world
 
Cold
 
Hidden in the white
 
The new hope bred

XIAOYAN ZHANG

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Mar 9, 2013, 11:27:48 PM3/9/13
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Mr.L

snowfall
pure white,charming
drifting,crunching,melting
It  is dotted with its color
snowflake
(American Cinquain Form)
 
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YING ZHOU

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Mar 10, 2013, 10:59:51 AM3/10/13
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                                                                           Snow of March
leaf 
aggrieved or protedcted
struggling, unstable, crying on the tree's arms
desire to running and playing with us
falling...









YING ZHOU

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Mar 10, 2013, 11:18:53 AM3/10/13
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                                                                     Snow of March
Artist
Arrogant,silent
painting, make up, design 
creating by the same color but different style
snowing



YING ZHOU

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Mar 10, 2013, 11:27:09 AM3/10/13
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Both poems I wrote by using didactic cinquain
the first line is a one-word title, the subject of the poem; the second line is a pair of adjectives describing that title; the third line is a three word phrase that gives more information about the subject; the fourth line consists of four words describing feelings related to that subject; and the fifth line is a single word synonym or other reference for the subject from line one. 

YIWEN JIANG

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Mar 10, 2013, 12:17:11 PM3/10/13
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snow in March

Buds
newborn,spring
Snowflake press it
Stubborn growth of buds
stand-by

JUN HAO FENG

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Mar 10, 2013, 3:28:35 PM3/10/13
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Didactic Cinquain



Snow
saturnine, monstrous
accumulating, drifting, Shoveling
Foes from the sky
Disaster


PANG YEN WU

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Mar 10, 2013, 3:34:46 PM3/10/13
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snow valley
white all are cover by white everybody become baifa
you can see  the foot step and heard the blood drop on the ground
damn is hard to aim so white so freezing
but you will know what you got at the end is totally burning hands




PANG YEN WU

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Mar 10, 2013, 3:48:49 PM3/10/13
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snow valley
white ,crystal
full of assassin
garenaade hold the position
fire the hole 

KUNJUN JIANG

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Mar 10, 2013, 3:53:58 PM3/10/13
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Snow
Nobleness,solitary
Jogging,sojourn,melting
Icebound everything it lay
Cold

SHANG CONG XU

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Mar 10, 2013, 4:43:57 PM3/10/13
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Snowfalls
Buoyant,white
Swirling,landing,integrating
What a beautiful scenery
Dazzling



MARISOL GERMAN

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Mar 10, 2013, 4:55:48 PM3/10/13
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March/10/13                                                                                                                                      Room;858
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                                                                    SNOW IN MARCH 





snow falling on the month of march
the atmosphere look sad and depressing
silence streets
the faces of the persons look frustrated and exhausted
but enjoy the snow because maybe this is the last time you see it.

YUWEI LIU

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Mar 10, 2013, 7:20:07 PM3/10/13
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Snow day                
White fairy tale world 
Car like a small snow-capped mountains 
Everyone is like standing on the cotton 
Fun and happiness

KAI CHEN

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Mar 10, 2013, 8:04:51 PM3/10/13
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Snow poetry

The snowing day of the March,
fall from the sky,
soft, cold,silence,and beauty.
We play with the snow,
happiness, meaningful, and unforgettable.




XIN YANG

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Mar 10, 2013, 8:16:28 PM3/10/13
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Snow is falling
flying, dancing, spinning under sky
cover the world with pure white
The touch of it, is cold
but the feeling, is warm

WEI JIANG

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Mar 10, 2013, 9:16:07 PM3/10/13
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snow pure,like the baby.
no matter how pure,
no matter how pretty.
one day will be dirty
just like baby

WEI JIANG

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Mar 10, 2013, 9:16:25 PM3/10/13
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the snow was pure,like the baby just born.
i m stood  in the snow,i felt sad.
no matter how pure,no matter how pretty.

ZHI YI ZHANG

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Mar 10, 2013, 9:57:31 PM3/10/13
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snow
pretty world
make tree became white
best gift the sky give to the human
thanks
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MING SHI ZOU

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Mar 10, 2013, 10:08:06 PM3/10/13
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White
Covered , cold
Hidden in the white
The new life born
Hope

BERRIN VAROL

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Mar 10, 2013, 10:15:06 PM3/10/13
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Seeing the snowflakes for the last time
Knowing that none of them are the same
Different views that they give to the trees
Happiness of the children trying to do snowman,
Nothing can make you feel better than feeling the snow.
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SHAIMAA IBRAHIM

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Mar 11, 2013, 12:21:13 AM3/11/13
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Snow , dear snow
what a beautiful tree bow
tommatoes are smiling
kids are sliding
what a beautiful march snow .

SAMANTHA SUAREZ NUNEZ

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Mar 11, 2013, 12:35:10 AM3/11/13
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          SNOWHITE.
         
             THE snow is so white
             like the light of heaven
             when there is snow you cant even see the clouds
             it is wonderful and fun
             like making a snow man in the yard.
            
               
          

BIN HUANG

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Mar 11, 2013, 2:32:59 AM3/11/13
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Snow
White, pure
Dancing, singing, exciting
Soft and sweet too
Adorable

KATTABEK IBRAIMOV

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Mar 11, 2013, 7:55:15 AM3/11/13
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1)
Quiet,
Snowing outside,
Trees are shivering,
Footprints are everywhere and
excited faces coming to school.
 
2) Quiet...
Listen to the snow falling off of the sky,
Smell the fresh snow that didn't touch the ground yet,
Have fun with all the moments now,
It might be the last chance you have, to enjoy.

KATTABEK IBRAIMOV

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Mar 11, 2013, 7:55:15 AM3/11/13
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WEN BIN CHEN

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Apr 18, 2013, 8:15:52 PM4/18/13
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Oh , snow~!
Oh,slowly falling down.
Like the way you go
I miss you , snow.
I love you , my slow white snow
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