Romeo and Juliet Poem

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Write a paragraph. What comment does the new poem make about love? What is one comparison you noticed in the poem? How does that comparison help

communicate the poet's message?

[JUN HAO FENG]

  “That Dangerous Feeling Called Love" by Mister 47 is trying to tell us that love is sorrowful and painful which is similar to the theme of the play Romeo and Juliet by Williams Shakespeare.  One comparison I noticed in this poem is that the poet compare the tear to rain using the simile.  This comparison help communicate the poet's message because like the rain, sorrow is endless.  Also, when one is crying endlessly, one's heart must be hurting pretty bad.  This comparison clearly shows the poets opinion toward love. 

[ZHAO FENG TUNG]

The poem that i read is "Why I Love You" by Udiah. This poem is about why we need to find love and how is love, it said that love like a power to work with us and give the reason why the love dong in our life. In this poem, the comparison to the guides person to our daily life, the poem said love give me a hope and teach us to care and share to people, and love is the passion in this poem like a sources. 

[JIA YIN HUANG]

Hi Mr.L

I take my group member xiaoyang's poem, which names I Know You .

I Know You

by Katie

When I first met you
I felt like I had known you forever,
telling you my secrets
and what I didn't want ever.
you listened to me
I bet you thought I'd never end,
who would have thought
we would become more than just friends.
Over a period of time,
I got to know the real you.
A boy so caring and gentle,
with a heart so true.
You've survived your life
with hurt and loneliness by your side.
I told you I'd never leave
because of the feelings I have inside.
I know you
like no one I have ever known,
and sometimes I wonder
what I'd do if you were gone?
So I have decided
time answers all.
If it is meant to be
time will remove the wall.
I love the way we are together,
you can always make me smile.
Will it ever really be forever?
I guess I will have to wait awhile.
Time will reveal, what lies ahead
but always remember
what I have said.
Meeting you has changed my life
and I really love you so,
the feelings I feel for you
I am never letting go.
Remember me always
and I will too.
I always think of
me and you.

I think this poem and the movie both give me the message about love brings people together or more closer and the characters' loves are very rigid(clinging).After first signt,Love brings them together,Romeo and Juliet fall in love.They love each other and they still want to merry each other and still together and love each other forever,even their family don't allowed. They can die to keep their love together. In this poem Love make the narrator and the girl have some connection and change their relationship, them become more than just friend. The narrator love is clinging.The boy remember everything about her and waiting for her forever .In the movie two major characters love each other but in the poem the narrator love the girl but he still need to wait( the girl not accept him yet). In the poem lines 23 and 24"If it is meant to be time will remove the wall. " the comparison is the wall and the distance between the narrator and the girl. This comparison reveals the narrator love is clinging and love brings people together and more closer. The comparison used can help reader to understand the poem.

[HAI LUN MEI]

          The new poem is from chou ying and it names “forever “by Kristi Lynn.   The new poem‘s comment is about love is joyful and beautiful. It is about the poet love her boyfriend very much and she through this poem to explain how happiness and how much love her boyfriend, so, we can know how much she love her boyfriend from this poem. I notice one comparison is she said they known each other for only a short period of time and she glow with happiness because her boyfriend around her. This comparison makes me know poet is very happy now, her boyfriend is very good to her, and she cannot live without him, poet accustomed to her boyfriend round her. Now, they are very enjoying their love and they need each other.

[KUNJUN JIANG]

 In the new poem it describe love as fear, he was fear to have it and fear to lose it. It compare the feeling of love as flood, impact his heart, control his body, emotion and thought. The feeling of love is like rain, giving him life and vibrancy to every part of him. I think the message of poem is telling us that love is like poison, invasion our brain, we are like a puppet.

[BERRIN VAROL]

The new poem "My Angel" by anonymous comments on love that how much they love each other and the way that they found their selfs in each other and also according to the poem both of them are the angels inside of the other.In this poem they are comparing love with angels.For the poet love is like an angles.The comparison that poet did in this poem helps us communicate with the message because angels are known as the happiest and the best thing in this life so, I think poet is trying to tell us that love is the best thing in this life.So Angels are the symbol of love for this poet and he communicate the message in this way.

[YING ZHOU]

Mr.L

The poem names From Juliet To Romeo.The comment that the new poem make is love control people's mind,it is powerful. The author writes,"When thy eyes touched mine or the very first time I knew it would be forever." Once you met your love, that would be forever,as the movie Romeo+Juliet, Juliet fall in love with Romeo at the first time they met. "Oh, love could not be more wise to me! ", This demonstrated Juliet was thoughtless make any decision at that time. Juliet was control by love. The poet's messages are communicated by use comparison connect the feeling of waiting for love.

[JIA HUANG WEI]

 The comment the new poem made is that love is a great inspiration ,like the poet says"you give to me hope and help me to cope, when life pullls me down,you bring me around". One comparison i noticed in the poem is that this poem express the greatness of love and what love can do for you ; my poem conveys the expection and desire of getting love and what can you do for love. The comparison connect the feeling of waiting for love and the feeling after actually getting love---it's nice to wait and it's great to have. 

[XIAOYAN ZHANG]

        The  comment between "I Know You" by Katie and "How Do I Love You" by Elizabeth Barrett Browning  is they both talk love, they are eternal for people who they love , they both thought love is deep and devout. The both love poetry is talk about love is amazing and sweet to them, they both allow to spend rest of life for their love, their faithful love. The one comparison I noticed in these two poems is the poem  by Katie is a girl wrote for a boy when she saw him at first time, she was showing her feeling when they meet at first time, the boy is changed her life he become the only love in her life. The the poem by Elizabeth Barrett Browning is about a wife wrote a poem for her husband, the love is more deep, and she used metaphor to describe her husband which is the way to show her love for her husband. She also showed her love in different ways, she said the everyday love with two images of light, the sun light and the candle light, she said no matter what light she sees him. The comparison helps us communicate the poet's message cause through the comparison, we will more clear about the different messages from the each poem and the same ideas from those two poems.

[ZHI YI ZHANG]

i will take about the poem that Mingshi share with us,the name of the poem is:"In a perfect world".For example:"i know love will find a way any where we go I'm home if you are there beside me"for this sentence, i realize the love is anywhere,that we can find the love is hiding on anywhere.relate to the movie Romeo and Juliet,i see how the love is motivate and it is such powerful think.because this comparison i see the poet's try to telling us the love is anywhere also the love will hide on anywhere,until you find it.Love will be invisible but as long as you find it, it will follow you for ever.

[PANG YEN WU]

I read the poem tiltle is Lost Love this poem is talking about the feeling of a girl who lost her love one.And i think it can compare to the stuff that we just did in the class with the whole class mate which is the story of romeo and Juliet the author is William Shakespeare this story is the most famous love story of the word it make me cry in the class today so that all i have nothing to said more i just like it so much .and the poem i just prepare for the work of this story it can totally ft in it because i think this two literary work have the same thing to tell they both are the girl who lost there husband so that why i tell it is so close meaning to each other in the poem it compare the whole sititustiou  to her every like in the second part of the poem it said he was my life, my hope, my love All is gone, passed by there f The hurt is such no one should bear What's to life, why should I care? it shows the the character in the poem is using her whole stuff to comparison to the feeling of lost love. 

[SHAIMAA IBRAHIM]

I have read (my love for you) by unknown

Is it worse never to find the love of your life,or to fine it and not being able to be with her?
They were comparing our mood with the weather how it change a lot.
That comparison help communicate the poet's message by using the mixed and stormy emotions and that shows us how it changes our mood , our situations and reaction toward something.

[YUWEI LIU]

Lost Love

Void, empty, hollow inside
My dreams have fled, my hopes have died
Existence has no reason
Life's just passing with each season

She was my life, my hope, my love
All is gone, passed by thereof

The hurt is such no one should bear
What's to life, why should I care? 

I weep all night for my love gone
My heart is sick, for death I long
Mine eyes well tears for love that's lost
I'll mourn always for the great cost

But in each day Lord give me hope
Strengthen me so I may cope
Grant me wisdom to help me see
Thy great way and not just me. 

The new poem is mean when he's love leave , he will be think the life for him that is no hope,no dream. And his heart was death. For him love is very important likes oxygen. In the poem the author comparison, her is his life. Leave her, he can't do anythings. The comparison can let we know love can give him hope. When he leave his love his heart will death. Her is very important in his life. 

[CUI JIN LU]

    The comment does the new poem "Maybe Someday" by ITSme make about love is passion,and looking forward to the arrival of love.One comparison i noticed in the poem one is looking forward to the arrival of love,other one is in love.The comparison help communicate the poet's message it can shown in the poem,the last sentence of the poem " I love someone who knows me not oh , to hope...maybe...someday...." ,he has passion to expect the love.

[MING SHI ZOU]

           The poem " the perfect world"  

       I think this poem was talk about In this world, we created love, love make people brave and happiness. Love is we have together. Maybe love is difficult, but we know that love will help us find a way, it will help us through the darkness into the light.The author use use of repeated sentences to express love is bright, it will help us to find a way. It no matter where we are, love is all around us, love are great and powerful.

[XIN YANG]

I did it already, and I have sent it to you.But now I cannot find the answer.

[SAMANTHA SUAREZ NUNEZ]

The poem of Romeo and Juliet comments about how they love each other.Juliet said no matter what happens and no matter how is the hate from their families,they still are going to love each other.She explain how her eyes described him when she saw him for the first time.And she said "i saw you from the balcony and i do not know what you heard but in my heart i mean every word of it,i would never lie to you.For her when she met Romeo it was like their love begun and that her soul was already with him,it was like they have married already.They will love each other until the death no matter what happens.One comparison of the poem is your love is like pure to me.This comparison helps to communicate the poets message by the way Juliet it is saying and how she describe it.For her their love was something incredible that she cant even explain to her self.Their love was so strong that both of them were truly in love and even though there was hate between their families,their love was still growing each day and it was powerful.

[MARISOL GERMAN]

I have read the poem of one of my friends and i see that my friend poem make a different comment about love his poem compare love with  whispers ,one comparison  did i noticed is when the author of the poem say that why can't i be this cliff? I long to have my hearth breathing your blood.your life,I long to have these roots envelop me so that i may be one world closer to you.Well i think this comparison  help us to understand the message that the author is trying to teach us by understanding  all these words and trying to understand what are the author feelings or  what he wish or whispering.