I was insomniac last night

[Vu Yen]

I and Trang from grandmother to our home at 9p.m yesterday, the gate is dark and then we saw two peoples who was worrying, I was afraid .so I didn't sleep by worried. Each time, I meanted to sleep then the odd noise was appear so 2 a.m I slept, hic. but then there was one big noise under the first floor, I worried and afraided, I stepped slowly and light , and thought someone who willfuled to destroy my folding door, I turned the light and saw everywhere I found that big noise which sent the ocean. Hic the ocean was deprived of water. I poured no the water in the ocean then I had one light sleep.  That was a long night

[Tung Vu]

e dặn 1 lần là lúc nào cũng phải đê I ở sau mà chắc chị lại quên, đúng phải là: Trang and I

thứ 2 là câu này chưa có động từ

The gate is dark : câu này sẽ đc hiểu là cái cửa có màu tối ( e nghĩ chị muốn nói là chỗ cửa nhà rất tối : It was dark at the (front) gate of my house)
lỗi đỏ là động từ

lỗi xanh là giới từ vv

nhiều lỗi quá, chị thử tự sửa lại xem sao. (tự làm thì sẽ nhớ hơn là ng khác làm cho :D

cứ dùng câu đơn giản cho thuần thục đã nhé, cách dùng động từ chuẩn đã, rồi hãy viết những câu phức tạp hơn :D

Good work :)

I and Trang from grandmother to our home at 9p.m yesterday, the gate is dark and then we saw two peoples who was worrying, I was afraid .so I didn't sleep by worried. Each time, I meanted to sleep then the odd noise was appear so 2 a.m I slept, hic. but then there was one big noise under the first floor(nếu dùng under ở đây thì sẽ hiểu là dưới của tầng 1), I worried and afraided, I stepped slowly and light , and thought someone who willfuled to destroy my folding door, I turned (bắt buộc phải thêm on/off)the light and saw ( nên dùng look around) everywhere I found that big noise which sent the ocean. Hic the ocean was deprived of water. I poured no the water in the ocean then I had one light sleep.

[Vu Yen]

Trang and I from grandmother to our home at 9p.m yesterday,It was dark at the front gate of my house and then we saw two peoples who was worrying, I was afraid. So I didn't sleep because then there were many odd noises which were appear so 2 a.m I slept, hic. But then there was one big noise in the first floor. I was afraid and worry, I stepped slowly and light and thought someone who willfuled to destroy my folding door, I turned on the light and looked around everywhere I found that big noise which was send the ocean.Hic the ocean was deprived of water. I poured no the water in the ocean then I had one light sleep.   --- Ngày Thứ 4, 14/11/12, Tung Vu <tung...@gmail.com> đã viết: Từ: Tung Vu <tung...@gmail.com> Chủ đề: Re: I was insomniac last night Đến: Tran...@googlegroups.com Ngày: Thứ Tư, 14 tháng 11, 2012, 15:28